Food: Start by Becoming a Food Hunter

Why do everyone like to dismantle CP and steal women? Although Shirley Yang is good, she is not the only one. With the protagonist's abilities and conditions, is it necessary to do this?

Why is the protagonist grateful every day? If you don't do it, the food will be delivered to your mouth by itself? It's even more like a child's life than the original Alu. Before killing, I bowed to thank the food. After killing, I expressed gratitude again. When I ate, I expressed gratitude again. Oh my god, I can't stand it anymore.

After reading four chapters, I don't understand why the protagonist needs help from others to survive after time travel. He owes a lot of favors. On the way back, this uncle and that grandpa, you might as well recognize him as his father. He also writes that the Yukihei family are his benefactors, and he is embarrassed to accept money for working for them. I just said, what's the point of setting this? In addition to giving things to others in the later stage, I also help in various ways. Reasonable, you say? Is it reasonable that you have traveled through time? He also asked people to go to his girlfriend if they had any problems, and he would help. At first glance, it looked like a nanny novel with a bad protagonist and a good person.

The writing is very good, the plot is too long

I will make unified changes in the future. If you have any suggestions, please continue to make them. In addition, the problem with the protagonist's food cells is that he doesn't need food cells like Jiro, or...

By the way, isn't Dark Lopus Sero put on black armor? So how does it get the Dark Lops cut from its forehead? ? ?

Is Ran Deng laying a foreshadowing? It feels like the description is like a different person. Medium prehistoric → high prehistoric? Or something else╮╯＿╰╭

There is no invention, just system exchange, and the author has no idea about the setting of Eye of God.

The Lock of Heaven is not only used for binding. Look at what Jin Gu uses. It is so powerful.

After reading the previous chapters, the large number of words in the panel is too large, which affects the experience too much.

This kind of subject matter is what Shuhuang likes to read. . . In this modern era, super powers have been added, which is a bit confusing. Then join Zhang Sanfeng and Jiu Shu. . What a show. . . Made into four different shapes

There are so many chapters with no progress at all between the male and female protagonists.

No matter how awesome Arceus is, he can only create countless universes within a world view, but the protagonist can break through dimensions. Travel through endless worlds. Only in this way can the protagonist appear valuable. Otherwise, the main character is really dispensable and why is he writing about it? Arceus uses Qivat's laws and power to further strengthen himself. The protagonist borrows the power of Arceus to become stronger step by step. Otherwise, it's really boring to watch. The protagonist is not even as good as a tool man.

Spells can be integrated into the body. I need to change this setting.

Platinum Star, why are you shouting the world's lines?

Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this. Who can read two chapters a day?

Opening so many books, every one of them is pretty rubbish.

When did it become Xueyue City? Isn't it Tianqi City?

Actually, it's not bad. I'll be able to watch it again after a few days. Hahaha

Brother, why do you use the word "ragged" in your introduction? Your clothes are torn*. . . . . . Weird, okay?

The way you write it, you're going to kill him! If you don't kill him, I will kill him directly.

Please rewrite it, the subject matter is very good. I have a few suggestions, 1. Don't broadcast live, 2. Not enough attention is paid to superconducting materials.

So weak, he was only an eighteenth level chuunin after the first battle.

It's too little, I'll keep it for now and update it quickly, author brother

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The sofa reminder and flowers are all given to you.

It should be 20 centimeters, eight centimeters is more miserable.

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