King of Fighters: From the Start, I Wield the Yang Five Thunder

If you want to write a good story about the protagonist being a chain smoker, can you write less scenes where the protagonist smokes? Smoking is so good?

I feel like the protagonist is a bit of a pick-me-up.

It's too cumbersome for you to have parents. I feel uncomfortable every time I see them.

After reading the latest chapter, there are no major surprises in this book, but there are constant small frustrations. Among them, the most affecting one is Mai Shiranui's combat uniform. In the King of Fighters fan fiction I have read, it is either mentioned once or twice at most, and then never mentioned again, or simply I just want to find a way to solve the problem of combat uniforms, but the author keeps emphasizing this problem and not solving it, which is really uncomfortable. If you don't mention it, readers can pretend it doesn't exist, but now this problem has almost become the elephant in the room. . .

Talking about empty power, let me tell you how you were attacked by a sneak attack when you were attacking others with Sharingan. Are your eyes made of glass beads?!!

Can the author please stop trying to die? Others think that writing a shadow clone is a poisonous point of the clone. I don't know what to say if you clone a human or the protagonist. In fact, I don't care. I'm afraid that you won't write anymore if you go to the palace.

The beginning of this sentence is ordinary. I am your savior. It's written in such a pathetic tone.

Come to a world fusion check-in! Bring Street Fighter, Life or Death together

I've seen the latest. It seems that everything is not going well for the protagonist at the moment. He has to get slapped by two big mouths before he hits anyone. He will lose some of his skills before doing anything, and his butt has not been wiped clean. It seems that he is getting stronger, but in reality it is no different from the beginning.

Clone several protagonists to achieve the "clone" poison point