Writing a Diary in the Wuxia World: The Eight Trigrams Formation of Gods and Ghosts from the Start

Really hang yourself! You can tell who the author is by looking at the protagonist. I can write a book about anything. The threshold is really too low! Don't you have any self-knowledge?

Not brother, but Li Qiushui wants it too? How many hands have worn out shoes?

The plot is okay. The main character's diary speech is as evil as that of a nouveau riche. He is too vulgar and annoying. Even if he starts a harem and takes his time, he is very shameless.

Why does the protagonist's diary smell like carved silk, like a gangster who won the lottery?

I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 10, this dick smell is too strong

The subject matter is quite good and Fei Lu was the first to write an eight-array diagram, but why is it that the protagonist can't walk when he sees a woman? A dick smell

After reading a few chapters, it is extremely poisonous. Is this something that a human could write? Is FL so stupid now that this kind of book can still be published?

What the hell, you don't need to be foul-mouthed if you want emotional value! It's full of diaosi atmosphere, and the division of military force is also in a mess. The author probably didn't write an outline. He just wrote whatever he wanted. The author must be collecting the readers' emotions! .

The second chapter is complete. I directly write that I am a time traveler. I know that others can see what I write, but I also write about my origin. Now the author doesn't design the brain for the protagonist of the novel?

I keep talking nonsense. This author has a good hand and can play like this. It is a talent. He writes the protagonist like a **