Wuxia Crossover: The Ten Greatest Immortal Gods and Demons in the World

It's the same old story: receiving a reward, a nouveau riche breaking through, their arrogance reaching the rooftops, being noticed by others, causing shock. Does the author think this makes them seem incredibly cool and powerful? It reminds me of my middle school days when I loved to show off. In class, there were always a few people who would constantly spout off some ridiculous things to show off and gain attention.

What a small world! News from the Ming Dynasty reached the Qin Dynasty in less than a day, and a round trip took only three days. Considering the limitations of ancient transportation, I estimate that all the countries combined were only about the size of a single province today.

I just don't understand why compilations and reviews always seem to arbitrarily alter the original text. If the dynasty doesn't match, then don't include it in the first place. There's no need to change the content; why make the characters a complete mess? If you're so capable, just create a novel based on the original martial arts story.

This is just a rambling account; I don't even want to read it anymore. Damn, he's so boastful, thinking he can do great things but he's nothing.

Compared to the water, who's even shortchanged? What about the Divine Turtle Laughing Three Times and his son, the Great Demon King, from the Storm Riders? What about Li Changsheng and Su Baiyi, those big shots who blocked the gates at the Four Extremes? Aren't they all stronger than those ten ridiculous immortal gods and demons?

I know which women you want to write about, but can you please stop being so disdainful all the time? A grandmaster looking down on his predecessors—do you think you're living too comfortably, or are we all so stupid that we don't know who the ants are?

The biggest problem with this type of book is that it elevates people who are not naturally gifted to an unrealistic level, making them seem like they are in a transcendent realm all the time.

Actually, this kind of comprehensive martial arts ranking is the most illogical. Take Di Shitian, for example. He killed so many people, committed such great sins, was so arrogant, yet his martial arts weren't the strongest. Surely, some righteous and powerful figure, or a powerful demonic figure who disliked him, would have intervened? And how could such a major event not have been recorded?

I've read 30 chapters, and the protagonist is described no less than 20 times. Each time I read about him, I write about him again, and even when he drinks tea, I write about him again.

The latest chapter is a complete mess; more than half of it is praising the protagonist's appearance.