Film and Television Drama: Starting in the Langya World

Author, you might as well make the protagonist's conquest of the world the main storyline. Don't just write it like this: one world ends, then another ends, ignoring the previous worlds? Or is time frozen? This writing style is from over a decade ago—transmigrating into a character's name but still using their past life's name, like wearing a disguise. There's absolutely no sense of immersion! Readers are sick of it; nobody writes like that anymore!

If the protagonist doesn't destroy Langya Pavilion after this list of princes is released, he's practically useless. There's no point in watching anymore; anyone can comment on the royal family now, so what's the point?

The Lin family's deaths were entirely justified. What emperor could tolerate a general disobeying orders? Even in modern society, the Lin family would have been doomed. Let alone in ancient times.

The writing is good, but the author always likes to play the son of other characters. From Nirvana in Fire to Joy of Life, they are all princes, they all have to rebel, they all have to unify the world, and they all directly replace the original characters, which greatly reduces the sense of immersion.

Chapter 99 is too far-fetched, even though it seems to make a lot of sense. But ultimately, he couldn't escape one rule: since Prince Yu was the Empress's adopted son, he automatically possessed the status of a legitimate son. This is itself a highly illogical point in the show!

So what's going on with Princess Yu? She won't take over, will she? Give me a straight answer, I'm afraid to even look at this.

Meng Zhi was already at a high level if he could withstand three moves from Yuwen Chengdu; a quick kill would be the norm.

Why must the protagonist be led by the nose by the system? A choice is only a choice if the two rewards are equal. One reward is a defense, the other a treasure—it's all just a facade; do you really have a choice? It seems like the protagonist is making choices willingly, but in reality, it's all options the system wants the protagonist to choose.

I remember when I watched Nirvana in Fire, it seemed that Prince Yu's mother was from the Hua tribe, so the emperor could not possibly let him succeed to the throne. In other words, the normal process would not work, unless the crown prince and Prince Jing both died, leaving no other choice but for Prince Yu to succeed to the throne.

Author, I think your system's choice is hilarious. A choice is only meaningful when two things are roughly equal in value. You're presenting two completely different things for someone to choose from—is there any point in choosing? You might as well just let the system give you the items directly. It's ridiculous. If you can't write a choice system, don't write one. If you gave me something directly, I could say you wrote it well. Now, all I can say is you have no brains.