The Outcast: Desolate Ancient Sacred Physique, Cultivating Qi into Immortality with the Eight Extraordinary Skills

I haven't read it yet, but after reading your introduction, I think it's not good. The two worlds are so different that I can already imagine that you overpower the protagonist.

Air Holy Body, please stay away

According to the destructive power of Zhetian's original realm, only saints can explode stars. The protagonist can become invincible in the alien world if he can support the four poles by one person. If the world is invincible and receives a nuclear bomb on his face, he will have to be a king. Without receiving nuclear bombs, he can become invincible through mobility and transform into a dragon. The difficulty is that the ancient holy body requires too many resources. There is a question mark as to whether the earth's resources can allow the protagonist to pass the realm of the wheel and sea. It will take until the year of the monkey and the month of the monkey to rely on the accumulation of resources.

When you write about a person, don't write about things that exceed the standard. Can you be sure? It just fell apart. Just reading the title of the book makes me feel that it is very fragmented. How much can you write without overpowering the protagonist?

Forget it, just by reading the introduction, you know that you must suppress the combat power. What is the concept of the ancient holy body? Even if you have just awakened, you can't touch porcelain among ordinary people, right? It is just like cultivating the gods in the martial arts world to suppress the prison. It is obviously the result of the martial arts in the fantasy world, which made the author feel like playing basketball with Pangu.

In the original work, the Ancient Holy Body was due to insufficient resources. There is no way to practice. Considered a waste body. If you want to practice even though you are alone, you may swallow the whole world and not be able to awaken.

The author of Sand Dollar doesn't read comments? Tell you that Xu San and Xu Si are confused and you won't change it?

Fantasy can't transcend the trilogy

Is Xu San Xu Si written backward?

The ancient holy body of the protagonist feels like a low-end version of the monkey version, a fake among the monkey versions. Otherwise, the combat power would not be so great. This strength is so overwhelming that it is a piece of cake.