Uma Musume: I Want to Raise a Little Horse!

As a regular reader of variety comics, let me tell the author about the common poisonous points of variety comics: First of all, the most common mistakes are to collect CP and miss girls. To put it simply, the heroine who appears cannot be with a man other than the protagonist - or even a woman. It is not even acceptable if you don't accept them. Who said it in the first place? By the way, if you need to write about a couple other than the protagonist, remember not to write their names, because this casual approach is not likely to cause disputes. The second is nymphomanship - simply put, it means letting the heroine be taken advantage of by others. The author should also understand this when writing about horse racing girls, right? Some comics like to put the female protagonist into trouble and then let the male protagonist descend from the sky, so it is easy to make this mistake. In the end, the protagonist is suppressed. This is quite common. They talk about how awesome the protagonist is, but in order to continue to suppress the protagonist, they backhand a wave of suppression, giving readers a disgusting feeling of eating history - you can see people criticizing this in many comment areas, which is a case of repeated abuse.

File, please continue with the horse racing girl. You are used to seeing the horse racing girl, and you can't appreciate anything else.

I feel that the more I write about it, the worse it gets. It's not as good as the previous books. It's rare for Lu to write about horses, but it's a pity that it's not to my taste.

My golden ship will fight for a lifetime! Retirement without injury! Who else! His dad is even more powerful and returns to No. 2 Just to bite No. 1 On the butt!

To be honest, I'm quite speechless. . Is this melancholy just a G2 horse girl who makes you feel like you are invincible? You have no opponents even after you haven't won G1? I almost laughed when I saw her psychological activities. It is not advisable to forcefully portray her. Do you want to help her at the end of the latest chapter? There are too many scenes involving passers-by and horse girls, which is boring.

Can I add a picture? I don't know Ma Niang very well

My daily writing is okay, but you, the author, have always been the same and are not very good at writing about competitions.

Consider my second kicker, she is so cute

I hope that in the next book, I won't do any more summoning novels about traveling through parallel worlds and summoning people again. At most, I'll adjust the timeline, otherwise it won't have the flavor of a fan.

If you write a comprehensive comic, you hope that the character of the protagonist will not be too poisonous, and that you will not be exposed to conventional poisonous points. Ask first what the poisonous points are, and pay more attention when writing.