Pokemon: This Ash Has Improved Way Too Much!
精灵：这个小智进步过了头！
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 197k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
96Chapters
1.3MReads
24.2kFlowers
9.5Score
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Reader comments 39
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Well, how can I put it this way? The author's taste is in line with my aesthetics, including fairies, elves, Pikachu, and Suicune. However, the plot is too exaggerated, or it is exaggerated to the point of being nonsensical. If it is too exaggerated, it will cause drama, and it seems a bit embarrassing. The plot of the academy, including the plot of the academy after it was released, is too exaggerated and dramatic. It looks like child's play, and it's easy to get into trouble. It's time for Xiao Gang to leave the team. Xiao Gang doesn't feel like Xiao Gang anymore. Although Xiao Gang in the original book also likes his elder sister, he really doesn't do the same to his friend's fiancée. Moreover, the protagonist can cook and raise Pokémon. I can't think of the reason why Xiao Gang is still in the team. Just because it's small and astringent? Are you still having sex with Xiao Juer, who is your friend's fiancée? After all, is this still Xiaogang? Let him leave the team. What can I say? Many of the plots and characters are too exaggerated and appear to be dramatic. Only the author's taste of the Pokémon team is not bad. The other characters and plots are too exaggerated.
There's something wrong with Xiaogang's writing. No matter how much Xiaogang likes women, he won't take action against his companion's fiancée, right???
My personal ideal for a Pokémon novel would be to focus on Pokémon battles, followed by picking up girls. As a result, the first few chapters of this book are all about the protagonist's interpersonal relationships and various ways to pick up girls, but it's okay.
Why does it always have to be timed? This really bothers me
The start is kind of like the perfect start.
The author would like to ask, can I accept Sonia?
You, suddenly came to a mess. . .
Does the author accept Xiao Juer? I think the new version with black hair looks better.
Brothers, what about Xiaogang's trend of positioning himself as a nanny plus housekeeper? Tool man Or should we arrange to leave the team and make all members of Team Ash become girls? Let's see which one you like
Silver hair, violent salamander, hunter j?