Comprehensive Comic: Starting at Sakurasou, I Picked up a Female High School Student

The women in Jiaofang Siye are not just free to touch. Many of them belong to all the nine tribes whose houses were confiscated by the emperor. They should be reserved for the emperor to humiliate and vent his anger and torture. Huang Zicheng and Qitai offended Zhu Di. Their female relatives were taken turns to serve by twenty big men. They became reproductive tools and were slaves for generations...

It feels like Sayu and Soul Penetration have become obedience tests agreed upon by these authors.

I will mention a few points, but you can also insist on not forcing yourself. The protagonist is a bit glib at times, and a bit licky to say the least. I've watched too many variety comics, and there are very few that can write emotional dramas well. Girls want to be coaxed, but some girls don't like straight-up sweet talk and prefer a subtle and romantic feeling, especially Japanese girls. That's why "The moonlight is beautiful tonight" is used and the second button on your top is placed near the heart. It is recommended that you think more about the character and strengths of the protagonist. The protagonist himself is a very good person of the opposite sex and has the superpower to open a harem. He should be more free and easy to treat girls. Don't catch anyone who is just a pat on the head, my treasure, my eldest lady, as if there is no love country. It feels like Huang Xiaom is deliberately acting like a gentle and affectionate domineering president.

Are you randomly adding the background of Niu Mo? If the protagonist had a fetal transmutation and grew up, how could he not know his background? Later, a background of Zhou Fang's family that the protagonist himself didn't even know was added inexplicably. Wouldn't that turn into a soul-transmitter halfway through? Just to take advantage of Zhou Fang Youxi's popularity, you just randomly add things, right? Even if readers don't care about writing and plot, your book will be useless sooner or later.

Yukinoshita has too much space, and the stuffing of private goods is a bit excessive, and the others are almost like backgrounds.

The first protagonist of nmb. After doing everything, he still pretends to be innocent, and shyly turns his eyes away from looking at the heroine. My evaluation is SB pretending to be a pure male protagonist.

To be honest, I read it without Sayu. When I saw the introduction of the book with Sayu, I immediately passed it.

After reading the synopsis, I knew that the comments were going to be quarrelsome. Sayu, a character who doesn't even want the male protagonist, dares to write about it. I'm really stubborn. I guess there will be a lot more people who don't have this character to read it. There should be no shortage of people like me who have no intention of reading it when Sayu is included in the synopsis. The author is new to Lu, and he can make such basic common sense poisonous points.

It feels like a good manga was ruined by Yukino. If it is more restrained or stronger, it can reach a higher level. What a pity

Sayu's sexual plot in recent chapters has directly wiped out my good impression of this book, causing my own woman to be beaten, and another wave of family affection to be poisoned in the end. Haha

Why write about Sayu, her, and things like Hoshino Ai? Even if you avoid lightning, the writing will look awkward.

In Chapter 19, the protagonist has been set up, his identity, time travel and a legal identity. The result is the hidden identity of the Zhou Fang family. I want to increase the popularity and change it directly from the beginning. The protagonist time travels from a young age and accidentally met Yuki when he was a child. Then he awakened the system in high school and got a Sakurasou. He had to add a hidden setting and a trap. What is the difference between using the system to increase favorability? Others don't know, but I personally like to watch it because the protagonist has a harem, treats the heroine well, and has a relationship line. You can directly add it through the system. If you want to get to know and conquer the heroine, you can take your time. But if it doesn't work, if you want to get to know the heroine early and make friends with other heroines, why don't you just have a normal hero to save the beauty? By the way, the Yukinoshita family is not that impressive, they are just like rural landowners. The writing of the Yukinoshita family is a bit strong, but the writing is not worthy of the strong style. And Yangno, I don't know why personally I just can't like her. I say she treats people well and gets along well with others, but I don't know if it's because I didn't write it well or something. It feels too fake. If I do this, I either like her or I'm interested in her.

The author is a human being and I eat it. This plot is really bloody and historical.

It's not like you are a harem-keeper and puts a Neptune in your harem. Are you mentally ill? I ** really thank you, your wife smells so good.

I really liked Yukino's plot at first, but you dragged me out and made it more and more annoying. I don't know if you really like Yukino or hate Yukino. The more Yukino's plot dragged on, the more annoying it became. It's better to stop it early and write some daily exchanges. You always made me feel that the previous heroines were all good, but when it came to Yukino, it became a hook, see you! Why is Xueno nobler than them? I need you to treat me differently

Recognition? Do you still need Shinomiya Kaguya's approval? Who the hell is she? Can't she be dealt with quickly? I'm speechless. .

He's really good at fighting. Thor could kill him in seconds, but he ended up struggling for nearly 20 chapters.

It's not that it's not hot. After all the sects have been bullied, you can only pretend to be cool. I didn't feel happy at all, I could only feel suffocated. The protagonist doesn't appear, and no one else knows about the protagonist. It's just that his lineage is being bullied and decayed. So why should he be included in this plot? Any plot in other novels must be more or less related to the protagonist, either by chance or to promote the development of the plot. However, the plot of this novel is incomprehensible to the viewers. It does not promote the development of the plot and has nothing to do with the protagonist. The protagonist does not go up to the sect competition, and does not help even if his own lineage loses. The competition is a normal development, so why write about him? How many words is there? This novel is not enjoyable, and it is very frustrating. The plot is incomprehensible, and I don't know what the purpose of it is.

Hajime's kingdom, as well as the Bug Kingdom (Zerg), were created by Nobita using the evolution lamp to accelerate evolution. For the sake of history, they will also help the future world to develop evolutionary guns and gun combinations, because they know the origin of their ancestors.

I hit a black bear and chirped a lot, and the movement of raising my head, well, you lower your head first while you are talking. When people ask, they say I lower my head first just to raise my head and pretend to be thirteen.

Finally someone writes about Wolf King

Update soon. I hope the novel doesn't contain eunuchs.

The modified version of Jiu Shu, Si Mu and Qian He shouldn't mean that all Taoist priests have become stronger and all monsters have become weaker.

The theme of your book is very fresh, so you can lay out some foreshadowing.

Why don't you release Chapter 30 again?

Does the S5 have skate shoes? I think it was released on S6, right?

Is there any Kaguya-sama who wants me to confess my love or has a white photo album with good writing? Please tell me thank you.

Update every day, won't your conscience hurt?

What the fuck? You have so many skills and you just open a store? Is it really appropriate for a man to open a store? Damn it! Was it written by a diaosi?

I don't know what the author thinks, but the name Yin Pobai is actually pretty good? ? ? Don't you know Yin Shang? ?