I Am Writing a Diary in Zongman

I'm not telling you anything, it's the stupidest idea to expose yourself on the spot by writing in your diary. You really think you are invincible. I can obviously come here quietly, but you have to die on the spot.

He's really an ex. He wrote a comic-type diary to give rewards to others. He also wrote that Shinomiya Kaguya wanted to directly capture and imprison the protagonist, but he didn't go there because he couldn't figure out the protagonist's strength. At that time, he acquired the ice ability. The protagonist only had the ability to maintain his own personality. Did he catch the protagonist directly at that time? It looked very cool. EX, it's annoying. The rewards given to the protagonist are all in one step. The sequence given to the protagonist requires time and ability to be promoted step by step. Do you think the sequence is comparable to One Piece's Frozen Fruit and God's Eye? It feels like any female protagonist who gets a diary can kill the protagonist at will. Giving natural fruits in the technological world also makes me feel weird.

A high score on Feilu doesn't necessarily make it good-looking. If it scores less than 9 points, it must be shit. It has a lot of poison points. I regret not checking the score so I added it to the bookshelf to read. I felt like I was eating a piece of shit when I watched it directly.

It's too sloppy, and I feel like I have to talk about everything. The male protagonist is a super cheat, but he can also talk about a bunch of useless things, such as the so-called Kudo who has nothing to do with the protagonist. How many words did he talk about?

Is the author female? This is full of Japanese light novels, which seem to have no ripples. In one word, they are "water". There are hundreds of them and not a single woman has read them. It's a waste of time.

Author, the protagonists of your books are all emotionally dull, not good at communicating, have no confidence in themselves, and underestimate themselves. They don't feel like young people, but rather middle-aged and old. Author, the protagonist of your book must be in line with the current situation, have a bit of youthful energy, and not be sluggish. In today's society, people in their thirties still feel very young. The protagonist must have a bit of the mental outlook of today's young people.

To put it simply, the protagonist on the one hand said that he did not want to be too involved in the cause and effect and was a low-key person, and then he went around flirting, looking like he had no intention of being a Japanese girl. To put it bluntly, this is: being a bitch and building a memorial at the same time. She's still the kind of prostitute who sells a hair in a public toilet for 50 yuan on the street.

There are more than 100 chapters, and I haven't included any girls. The plot progress is too slow. I update two chapters a day. The actual content is too little. Come on!

I got the diary and didn't use it for a year. I can explain it by saying that the protagonist is a bit stubborn. As a result, all his information was exposed as soon as he wrote it down. This made the matter meaningless and wasted a year of getting stronger. Moreover, it is too bland. There are too many irrelevant people writing about it, and the protagonists feel that they have no role to play. Before, when I watched the tutoring chapter of I Am the Protagonist, I thought it was quite interesting and not that boring. Now I just ask that it won't be so watery and that the coolness will be reflected after it is put on the shelves.

The protagonist has extremely low self-esteem, and everyone he meets is you

Analysis of the joke: Chapter 1 says that there is no Akechi and Shidou Justice, and Chapter 569 says that these two people have been found.

The author uses the protagonist's various explanations and sorting out the cause and effect relationships to occupy too much content, but there is very little sense of participation in promoting the actual plot, and there are even repeated plots (the dialogue between Mao Li asking Xiaolan about club activities)

Thanks for the comment. I can't even write it anymore. You sent a prostitute to a prostitute. There may be more scandals in the future.

Author, where did your dollar exchange ratio come from?

Commentary on Chapter 76: Pluto Thirty Million Years Ago in "Man in Triga: The Beginning of Pluto Template" written by Fun Hokage.