Special Forces: It All Begins When I Meet Xu Sanduo

What a piece of trash! The protagonist has earned two second-class merits and three third-class merits, and he's a graduate of Tsinghua or Peking University, and you're telling me he can't be promoted to officer and can only become a non-commissioned officer early? Author, are you kidding me?

What does the female lead mean? Did she get dumped by another man and then the male lead end up with her?

You keep making those "ya ya" sounds, I'd think you were being cutesy, buddy. Watch it, it's really uncomfortable to watch.

Every sentence is either wrong or it isn't; I'm so tired of listening to audiobooks, I don't want to listen anymore.

I only have one question: Xu Sanduo is a top student in the TV series. Did you not watch it carefully?

There are many typos and the character descriptions are unclear.

Starting out as a babysitter? How boring.

Every sentence ends with "ya," what's wrong with that? Can't you write a book without that interjection? It's so annoying! It hurts! Military dramas, so many interjections—it's painful to read, and even more painful to listen to.

There are too many typos, making it incomprehensible. Why are you reporting the number of shots instead of the number of rings when shooting at targets?

The paragraph ends with too many "ya" and "he," and too many pauses. The same meaning is always repeated in different sentence structures. The writing skills need improvement.