Bengtie Yuanshen: Make Two Short Videos and Become Stronger

Let me ask you, North, people have to move forward, and there will always be progress. Why do you write so many books, and each one is written like a novice? When you write the so-called second creation, the protagonists of Huanying Liu disappear directly. Then you write about other combat power issues that seriously stretch your hips. I won't talk about other books since they are finished. Then I will talk about yours. Just like I read about your other books before, I also left a message below. Do you really not know how to write protagonists? You seem to never be able to tell the priority. This is the story of your protagonist and not the story of other characters. Can you please clarify this priority? Although you have to get it right, can you please read more other similar books to see how others write and learn more to polish it? I won't say too much. Please review your book carefully and polish it. There are so many problems in the early stage. How do you want us to read it later? I hope you make some progress this time

If the protagonist was a pure dark protagonist, I would still enjoy watching it, but this protagonist really pissed me off. The protagonist of the dark flux will never let others go if they offend him, but the protagonist of the dark flux will not put himself in a just or correct position. But the protagonist of this book is a real ** person. If someone insists on giving you a house, if you don't give it to them, it will be a heinous crime for others. Why should you follow normal procedures? It's funny. What is normal procedure? What procedures are there? You have no right to blame others for whether they want to give you a house or not. If you were like a dark-style protagonist who simply killed others because you thought they had offended you, I would still enjoy watching it. And this protagonist feels that others are wrong if they don't let him live, which is a heinous crime. He is really a traitor, and he kills others because of this. I wonder if you didn't bully you and said bad words to you. How can you have the face to accuse others? You are the most wronged and right. If others don't follow you, it is wrong and it is a sin.

That Universal World is not good. It's too weird. I will skip this Universal World every time.

I wonder if this is a harem novel?

It's pretty good. I can write it well. Come on, I'll send you flowers tomorrow.

When will I write the Dragon King vs. Zhongli dance? Please watch me carefully.

Wait a moment, then I see the name. It turns out to be you. Beifang has opened a new book.

Is the timeline of the Type Moon Chapter wrong? Wasn't Sakura sent away a year before the plot started?

Nice! ! ! I like to go to the fate part. If it weren't for me, I would be naked. High and low reward ** points

Quite interesting, keeping the style and not cliché

Wasn't it still level 17 before? Why did it change to level ten again in chapter 59?

Comments on the chapters of "Bengtie Yuanshen: Becoming Stronger with Two Short Videos" written by Liu Liubei.

It's not like a novel, it's like describing deeds

Died early in the morning! Just don't come to your prosperous age of Kangxi and Qianlong, okay? Is it good to eat bran and drink water? I didn't plan to read this book when I saw the title and introduction**