In the Film and TV World: Starting as a Rebel in the Story of Xinghan

Write less about the game, more about the plot, and don't go off topic.

Neither fish nor fowl can be distinguished, and the 20 or so chapters are all useless.

You are sure to start with Xing Han brilliant, but why don't you see that you don't get to the topic later?

There is no need to add a few chapters to this or other worlds. If the author likes, he can finish writing Xinghan and then write Devouring Starry Sky. If he still wants to make money, he can finish writing the first world first and then talk about it.

You should call it "Star Swallowing Starry Sky"

Is it true that the character cannot be changed? It can be daily or affectionate, but the character of the protagonist really adds a little bit. I have read all of your books. Except for the one about mixed martial arts, I really feel that each one is not as good as the other one. I hope this one will be better.

Against heaven's will, I'll let you down again. Can you please stop playing your crappy game? I'll go with it. Either you just write about Devouring the Starry Sky, or you just simplify the game content. I see that you are also an old author, so how can you still make this issue of priority?

The two worlds are written together, even swallowing more of the starry sky. For me, basically two-thirds of the chapters are unnecessary.

When to start topic

Watching the new book, I want Hualan