Writing a Diary in Dream of the Red Chamber, I Leave the Beauties in Pieces

I haven't read the original book of Red Mansions, nor the TV series. I didn't want to comment at first, but now that I've seen it, I want to ask, is Jia Baoyu in the original book really a loser?

Two updates a day, one chapter is 5,000 words, and the guarantee is 10,000 words per day. If something happens during the day, I will make up for it later.

Sorry, there is no Jia Mu(????)

Aunt Xue and Mrs. Wang will arrange it. Madam, you don't want Baoyu to lose his fame, right? Aunt, you don't want Brother Pan to suffer in prison, right?

Comfortable, really comfortable. To be honest, Jia Baoyu's thinking and personality have been fixed. It's not a question of whether he can be saved if he is designated to cause a big disaster. After all, the Xifu can't figure out his identity, and the male protagonist Dongfu has no choice but not to help the Xifu. No matter whether the male protagonist becomes an emperor or a loyal minister in the future, Jia Baoyu has many ways to get into trouble and be taken advantage of. The only way is to be thrown into the army and die in the battle. Everyone will be clean. If they can survive, they will change to some extent after experiencing the war. But according to his temperament, it is impossible to die in battle. He will probably find an opportunity to surrender to the enemy. Even if his house is confiscated, he will not change. I don't know how to save him.

According to the name of the woman in the book, she has a diary. Why doesn't Jia's mother have one?

I just want to ask if you have accepted the old lady! There are so many Red Mansions fan fiction and none of them have been collected! So hateful

Quick, quick, quick, rush to the queen mother

After reading about 150 chapters, let's talk about the questions: 1. The author particularly likes exclamation points and wishes he could use them for every punctuation mark. 2. It can be seen that the author seems to want to drag out the article, and especially likes to use sentence patterns and words such as "is a...", " Zhu", "Zhi", "... Zhu", etc., But I can only say that the use is a mess. Although it is the sentence structure and words of Red Mansions and ancient Chinese prose, you keep using them and using them incorrectly in many places, which greatly affects the perception. After all, your article is written for modern people, so it is best not to do this, at least use it correctly and not so frequently. 3. There are also some other minor flaws. For example, the early plot is a bit similar to a Red Mansion I once read, etc. I won't point them out one by one. Summary: If you can read it, I will probably continue to read it. After all, I really haven't found any books that I can read recently.

Damn it, don't any of you here want to try the milk-flavored cold-flavored pills?