Naruto: Getting Stronger by Taking Disciples, From the Start I Pick Up Kushina
木叶：收徒变强，开局捡到玖辛奈
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 179k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
83Chapters
1.2MReads
6kFlowers
10.0Score
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After it was put on the shelves, I started to add poison. Let's not talk about what kind of gays were added to Conan. Xiaonan was bought from a brothel. It's really cool. There is also the Palace of Evil at the back. Shinai also carries an old man, who is carrying you.
The most annoying thing about writing a Naruto Pirates story is that you have to cover it up with a martial arts fantasy, what about the early, middle and late stages, and then say it's classic and say that your strength is not at the early stage and you can fight across levels.
It's so funny that you go to the casino to cheat with your reincarnation eyes. This guy is really going to go to the sewer.
There are a lot of problems with this novel, and I recommend reading it again. After all, there are no problems with the plot and subject matter, and it is quite attractive. However, the hypocritical protagonist's overpowering Goldfinger is the reason why no one has read this book. It's a joke if you are afraid of losing your combat power. After all, the Sixth Level will not show you a hundred times when it undergoes a qualitative change. Then it will be a plot to tease the apprentice. If the character of the protagonist does not change, my experience of reading novels for five years says that I will definitely be disappointed.
It's an outrageous plot, it's just a random change, and you're even addicted to flirting
I really hate the fact that Raikage is so crazy and arrogant. He even kidnapped Hinata. I don't know how he could bear it and killed those who had sex with Hinata.
If the author doesn't know how to write a book, then don't write it. Are you kidding me in the early stages of the Samsara Eye super shadow? There are more than 10,000 calories of chakra. You are forcibly insulting the reader's IQ, right?
People can just transplant Hashirama cells with the soil and wander around with Kamui on. You have the ultimate immortal body and you are still afraid of going blind? Pressure strength, right? Find out more and then write.
How long has it been since the author had a good conversation with a girl? It would only be embarrassing if there was no foreshadowing for the sensational plot, and the main character Goldfinger is directly invincible in the ninja world, okay? Why suppress the fighting power? A hundred times three magatama is the kaleidoscope? The fighting power is too obvious. The most important thing is that the protagonist is too hypocritical. The plot where he even slept with Shinai and pretended to be a gentleman shocked me. I thought he was a strong man who can look directly at his own desires and accept them and never let them go, but he turned out to be a hypocritical person.
Such a hypocritical protagonist is completely ** unless he changes. Even if he is a heinous protagonist, I will not be affected by it.