Cultivation: I Possess the Heaven-Piercing Bottle and the Starry Sea Bottle

It's too slow-paced. Even if you want to learn from a mortal, this isn't how you do it. At least other mortals can get involved in cultivation early on, while the protagonist is already on sale on Feilu, still stuck with a useless cheat code. I have absolutely no interest in subscribing. Leaving the cheat code and adding restrictions without using it provides no enjoyment. If the protagonist hadn't been relatively unaffected, it might even be a bland story.

The synopsis claims it restores youth and allows the protagonist to reincarnate. However, the content reveals it's about his past life. A blatant deception. The protagonist tries to show off with a cheat-like ability, but ends up being a complete idiot. There's even a miraculous pill that supposedly increases internal energy, but after consuming it, the protagonist is still at the bottom of the rankings. Almost every chapter has typos.

I really don't understand. A cultivation novel has been published, but I haven't even touched on cultivation. What's the point of learning martial arts in the mortal world?

Other people can use it by absorbing moonlight. It feels like I still have to suffer the hardship of earning spirit stones. Other mortals can use it, but the protagonist can only watch others use it. Why can't others use it by absorbing moonlight? And why does the protagonist have to wait until he has spirit stones to use it? Is it because the protagonist's skill is...? There are typos in almost every chapter.

Are you kidding me? It's been so long, and there's still this incredibly slow-paced cultivation novel? The protagonist's cheat ability is practically nonexistent. Do you think this is the early days of online novels? Modern readers don't have time to watch their protagonist struggle and fight. Reality is tough enough as it is; they read novels for enjoyment, especially on Feilu. Do you even know anything about Feilu?

It's enabled, but it's also indirectly suppressed (by modifying settings), so it's essentially not enabled.

What kind of writing is this? It claims to be about cultivation novels, but what's the result? It's still just that kind of cultivation novel even after it's been published. It's truly pathetic. It might as well just flop. Why write novels? Go write news; the news industry needs you!

I was waiting for you to write the climax, but it turned out to be a long, tedious mess!

A terrible novel, riddled with typos! The sentences are incoherent, the dialogue is disorganized, and it seriously deviates from the title. It claims to be about cultivating immortality but is actually about practicing martial arts—specifically, a cheap martial arts technique that one hasn't mastered even after decades of practice.

The Palm Immortal Pot and the Starry Sea Bottle are somewhat similar to "A Thought of Freedom".