Five Thunder Rites from the Start, and Reba Became My Top Supporter

How can I put it, the subject matter is good, I like the harem and people appearing in front of the saint. Unlike other novels of the same type, which are secretive and only show off at the end. What's the point of becoming stronger if you're so invincible and still hiding behind the scenes? But there are a few things that make it disgusting. One is the issue of realm. You can either directly copy some familiar realms or write about religious realms. If you create a herb-gathering realm, you won't feel the weirdness anymore. The second one is to put pressure on the protagonist to become stronger as soon as possible to cope with the catastrophe that will destroy the world in half a year. It feels like the protagonist has traveled through time just to save the world, and has a sense of destiny that has been arranged. It's so tiring to watch like this

The door to the parallel world is gone, no matter what happens to your protagonist. The protagonist is a half-way monk, and the Taoist sect has no business with you.

It's really outrageous. The Taoist inheritance in the parallel world has been broken. If you read the Taoist canon, you will find that the Taoist inheritance will not be interrupted. One is the inheritance given by heaven, the other is the preaching in dreams, and the third is in the famous mountains and rivers. Unintentional discovery of pre-humanitarian law inheritance. I only hope that the Immortal Way will be realized, that it will be light and beautiful, that the heavens will be turbulent, and that the Tao Qi will last forever.

Author, you can explain the knowledge of looking after the door, you can also cultivate immortals and upgrade, and you can also interact with female stars. Write them all, and you can also collect more female stars to read comments. Don't miss it.

The subject matter is good, but it's embarrassing to watch!

Very well written, keep it up!

How long has it been since there was no update? How long has it been since there was no update? You damn eunuch, don't write novels anymore, don't write them either, I'll scold you if you do.

How long has it been since there was no update? There were no updates yesterday or today, and I didn't log in even one day yesterday. Don't update too easily.

I'm just wondering, how long has it been since you updated? Why don't you update? You do.

There has been no update all day today. It's time to get the update. Hurry up.