
Anime Crossover: Starting with Sora, Unlocking the Five Thunder Righteous Technique
综漫:开局穹妹,获得五雷正法
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 205k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
99Chapters
1.3MReads
3.4kFlowers
9.8Score
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There are all kinds of mismatches. The protagonist's personality, character, abilities, the theme of the book, and the writing style. Everything seems to be inconsistent, as if they want to take advantage of the popularity of the variety comics and then forcefully blend in. If the characters in the variety comics are replaced by original ones, and the so-called eldest lady is replaced by the daughter of the patriarch of the big family in Urban Xuanfeilu, it will be right. It is written like this If this were the case, the author's writing style, which is more martial arts style, would not be inconsistent, and would be more suitable for this kind of protagonist who is particularly emotional and yells and screams from time to time. In Feilu's comprehensive comics, carnivorous protagonists who are strategizing and relatively calm are more popular. The description of the protagonist's communication with the female characters in this book can already drive away many readers.
After reading only six chapters, I already know what the story will be like: evil spirits appear and circle around the person with the protagonist's filter. The protagonist shakes his tiger body and uses his golden fingers to kill the evil spirits like writing a running account. Female character: Wow, Asashi is so powerful, this can be given for free! It is customary to meet a few evil spirits during a date, or the original character on the background is violently killed on the spot.
The protagonist's extraordinary strength still makes such a fuss when pursuing ordinary people? Even the heroine is not worthy, right? Ordinary people have only two choices when faced with the love of an extraordinary person: death or falling in love with him. There is no third option. Just kidding, my extraordinary strength makes me gentle to ordinary people. Why do I need this strength? How cool it would be to just stop eating beef. What you read in Feilu is a cool article, not your main character Gentleness. That's already a sign of weakness.
Let's not complain about the system rewards, just Asuna. Asuna's mother is like a fool. The protagonist doesn't have to pretend to be cool, and behaves like a fool. I have said a lot before, but when it comes to charging, it comes up to one million. This is going to make me laugh to death. Even if there is no charge, I have to show my attitude. The result...
When I helped Yukinoshita Haruno several times, no need to be polite, he was Yukino's friend, and he gave a "wry smile" after getting the bank card. The male protagonist is really eager to help others and has no personality at all. The description of character relationships is also not detailed enough. For example, it was quite baffling that the school incident broke up with several girls. When did their relationship get better? Hiratsuka Shizu's attitude has not been explained yet.
Emilia suddenly appeared, poisonous, direct benefactor, even more poisonous
Why does Yotsuya Miko have short hair? Moreover, those ghosts and ghosts are called gods by the people of the day. You really think of them as gods. Taoism can only defeat them.
You don't have to pretend if you don't know how to show off. If you have extraordinary abilities, just think about how to show off in front of others. I see that in so many daily dramas, the protagonists with extraordinary abilities will not be revealed easily and will only be passively discovered by the heroine. However, this protagonist takes the initiative to show off and must kill ghosts and monsters in front of the heroine. . If you are accidentally caught while killing ghosts, you are pretending. You are too deliberate, and the ghosts are all surrounding the heroine, right? I am really speechless.
Why does the protagonist suddenly know how to use talismans and golden light spells? I flipped through it several times and didn't see when I got it.
What the hell? Qiong said she went to class and then walked to her room? And didn't the protagonist take a day off? Why do I still have to go to school after taking leave? The teacher asked him to go to the office even though he was on leave?