Naruto: The Sign-In System Begins

I'm convinced, don't write it if you're not good enough, the fourth generation must die, otherwise the author will not write the plot if he is so desperate! It's really **! Street boy!

It's really uncomfortable to see the real six

After reading the first chapter, I couldn't tell whether the author was poor in writing or just naive. I was not arrogant and complacent. I practiced silently and it happened 4.5 Times.

From a quick glance at the first chapter, I felt that the word "cultivating silently" appeared several times. I thought I had turned to the wrong page.

In the first few chapters, he said that he should keep quiet and develop, but in the later chapters, he just punched Susan. You really know how to do it!

In Chapters 1 and 2, I kept repeating over and over again that I have a system. . . It's not a water problem anymore

This level of writing is at the average junior high school level. Some top students in elementary school can write better than you

Don't like pirate skills appearing

A review of the chapter "Konoha: Starting from the Sign-in System" written about worries and worries. Chapter 1: Uchiha Ryuun.

Is the author *? If you have the ability and strength, nothing will change and you will always emphasize extermination.