Red Mansion: Don't Look Back, I Am Your Majesty.

I've always been embarrassed, and I've tried the poison.

In fact, I hate that the author who writes about Naruto makes the protagonist so show off, because some protagonists are initially afraid that Konoha's high-level officials are targeting him, but the system gives him some abilities, but his strength is not good, because with the system, he knows that he will definitely be the strongest in the future, and then he starts to pretend and act in various ways. He starts to pretend when he has no ability to protect himself, which is a bit stupid.

Stealing a star, the final ending is still a bit confusing.

Let's look at the creative ideas at the beginning. It starts to fall apart after more than ten or twenty chapters. After 30,000 to 50,000 words, I lose my bearings.

Can you please stop writing about Uncle Qin Keqing? This joke has been around for many years. Every Red Mansion fanfic has it. Are you tired of it?

Was it written by someone else?

No space? Can't even hold anything! Didn't he rob the palace if he killed the emperor? Your system is too messed up!

You actually have no husband, and you are currently committing a crime. Author, I despise you. *To save your life.

This author is very diligent in reviewing and deleting...

This time it starts off really well. The physical body travels and the identity is replaced. The poisonous points are basically avoided. The anticipation is also very good, and I have a strong desire to watch it. The only doubt is that Wang Xifeng and Qin Keqing are married again. . . The former is not described yet, so it's hard to say, but in the latter case, Jia's mother started to talk about Jia Zhen: "The son said he was married." I thought it meant that he was not married yet, but then he added the sentence "Rong Ge's daughter-in-law". If she had not been married, she shouldn't be called that, right? Is this a marriage? If not, I hope it can be cut off in advance and not written as an adult wife. If it is already married, it can also be set as Jia Zhen coveting it and not allowing Jia Rong to have a bridal chamber. This can temporarily avoid certain poisonous points and let the protagonist come back to cut the mess quickly. Of course, it is best to cut off the beard before getting married. As for Wang Xifeng, she didn't appear here, but Lin Daiyu is going to Rongguo Mansion. She should be married, right? But looking at the introduction, it doesn't seem to be the case. I hope it's perfect.

In fact, you can add some more fantasy and unscientific stories, such as Heaven and Earth, Please Seriously Fall in Love with Me, The Strongest Disciple Kenichi, etc. The people in it are quite B. T., And the girls are also very good.

I gave you a monthly pass, please update quickly.

Sister Feng: I originally wanted to give birth to a son to inherit the family property and title, but I didn't expect that after giving birth to a prince, there was still hope of inheriting the throne.

The protagonist recruits a group of powerful generals to show the court what war means. If you lose a few times, the court will be on the verge of collapse.

What the hell is the blue white beam in Chapter 3(?д??)?

Hey, you're not going to write about the Nazuo battle, are you? Can't you finish taking stock of the magical arts?

There is no charge. . Pika pika pikachu. Soulless

I always feel that your writing style is very familiar... But I can't remember...

You can't write a book without being Li Er's son, right? Damn it, every one of them is written about Li Er's son, is it over? You can't be a free person. Isn't it nice to fight, drink, and pick up girls when you have nothing to do?

Time travel to Gaoyao and then run to change history? I'm afraid it's just a small change and people are gone. Shinhwa is a closed loop of time, right?

What kind of shock wave is Dakodo? Ailan has already reached the Eighth Master. Dakodo is not even worthy of the World Championships.

About Chapter 28 of Yu Qiangu's "Zongwu: Cutting off the Descendants of Hu Nuwa and Obtaining the Innate Tao Body" Xianwu fellow practitioners, the connection from Blue Star! (3. Asking for evaluation of flowers) Chapter comments.

Commentary on Chapter 42: A Le's Appointment with "Hong Kong Movies: Stuttering Little Stutter, Return to the Shadow Corps" written by Siheyuan Villain Knight.

I checked. Wooden silencers are not advisable. It is better to use metal.

The writing is very poor, there are too few words in each chapter

"Hong Kong Movies: Three Years Undercover, I Became a Big Hero" by Liu Feibo Meteor! Chapter 6 The elders are dissatisfied? With great ability and absolute force, who dares to act arrogantly! Chapter review.

About "I am an NPC in Naruto Game" written by Xianyu 123 Chapter 1 Is there a bug in Naruto Game? ! Chapter review.

Someone has read it. Please update it soon. No need to ask if anyone has read this question. It's only a few chapters long.

Regarding Chapter 42 of "Zong Man: Wrong Place for People, Start with Rebuilding the Familia" written by Xian Shang Ku Deng, chapter review of Lily's status update.

I don't want to watch the series after seeing the name of Pig's Feet