People Write Diaries in the Red Mansion, and All the Gold Hairpins Have Their Defenses Broken

I haven't read the original book of Red Mansions, nor the TV series. I didn't want to comment at first, but now that I've seen it, I want to ask, is Jia Baoyu in the original book really a loser?

Chendong's old age is unknown, and he has red, orange, yellow, green, blue, and purple hair.

After reading about 150 chapters, let's talk about the questions: 1. The author particularly likes exclamation points and wishes he could use them for every punctuation mark. 2. It can be seen that the author seems to want to drag out the article, and especially likes to use sentence patterns and words such as "is a...", " Zhu", "Zhi", "... Zhu", etc., But I can only say that the use is a mess. Although it is the sentence structure and words of Red Mansions and ancient Chinese prose, you keep using them and using them incorrectly in many places, which greatly affects the perception. After all, your article is written for modern people, so it is best not to do this, at least use it correctly and not so frequently. 3. There are also some other minor flaws. For example, the early plot is a bit similar to a Red Mansion I once read, etc. I won't point them out one by one. Summary: If you can read it, I will probably continue to read it. After all, I really haven't found any books that I can read recently.

Japer: Bao Yuer~ From now on I will call you brother! You call me daddy, and we can talk about our own things!

More than a thousand chapters were completed without ghostwriting, and the writing style did not change much, which is rare in Lu Zili

The author of this Red Mansion fanfic, your writing is really wonderful. Author, I gave you four monthly votes! Come on, author!

Hey, did the author forget about the system? I remember that there were a lot of soldiers stored in the system.

The version written by the author about Mrs. Wang! Depending on the situation, I have to accept it! But I feel that apart from the good description in the original book, the TV feel is not right.

I want to know whether the protagonist himself knows that the diary he writes will be sent to others by the system. This has not been mentioned before

It is estimated that there will be a rebellion... The emperor who is against the protagonist is not going to die soon. King Qin has a network of connections and is no longer on the same side as the protagonist, and he even has a grudge! Or the protagonist supports King Xin to become emperor? And then ignore King Xin or the Prince Regent? I could already guess the ending, but the author did something I didn't expect!

Who is reading this second B content?

The threshold is too low. It is of no use to collect data. It is better to just give it to someone who can see the fish. Being able to see the fish is the stupidest thing. If you have seen it, why do you catch fish? You can find someone to hook up with you.

My head hurts when I see the constitutional monarchy

The author's game is a bit big, how do you plan to fill it in? In a word, keep going

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Bad review! The protagonist is useless at all