My Foundation System Was Exposed

For things like the Supreme Divinity, it can only be said that the drama is very big, but I think the author's setting is okay. After all, the Supreme Divinity's dishes can only be said to be real dishes. For example, a certain deer is indeed not as good as joy and nothingness, but for the others, I can only laugh.

The instant kill of 049 is given by the three brothers of death. It can be instant when the Star God comes. 682 Also has the Dragon Ancestor version. In Tianyan's eschatology, 343 is the supreme divinity.

It's too messy and cumbersome.

Did you just write the outline? Yes, this is outrageous.

Yesterday I read Chapter 80 and you marked a finale after it. I C I thought you were going to screw up.

What did you write??? A mess. ??

The writing style is good, the look and feel is just about right, there are too many typos, and the running accounts are also a problem.

Come on, author, write down the strong character between the Foundation and the Supreme Godhead, so that people in other worlds can feel the gap.

Let me take a look. I have found a lot of foundation books and have read many of them, so let me take a look at yours.

One chapter is an introduction to SCP, plus a few meaningless comments, which is mediocre.