
I've Become an Immortal, and You're Telling Me This Is the Honkai World?
我都成仙了,你说这是崩坏世界?
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 510k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi & Gaming
- Subgenre
- Virtual MMORPG
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
184Chapters
3.9MReads
62.5kFlowers
9.8Score
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Brothers, I suggest that if you want to watch Cultivation of Immortals, it is best not to watch the immortals in Fei Lu. The mythical Daluo, that is, the Taoist Shangqing Celestial Immortal on the other side, can make you fall into a single universe.
I don't know when the author's writing habits will change. The protagonist has no subjective initiative. I told you about it in the last book. In more than twenty chapters, the presence of the protagonist is almost non-existent. Just like the existence of the protagonist in the previous book is just an additional setting for Ellie to find her father, there is no more fairy tale here. On this point, I can guarantee that the results will not be better. Even if you let the protagonist appear now, the question is will the readers tolerate you for twenty chapters? Have you ever thought about this problem? However, you are not a behind-the-scenes stream, and even if you are a behind-the-scenes stream, you will tell the whole story about what the protagonist did, or you will explore what the protagonist has done, but the result is not the same. In the end, it is still the original development routine. If you expect the protagonist to come out to save the situation in an emergency, then I advise you to give it a rest. It is best to avoid such low-end routines that are just for showing off, especially when it comes to themes like Honkai Impact. If you are really not good at writing about protagonists, then don't write about normal themes, and just make an inventory of movies to watch and compare them. The biggest problem with your last book was not that you were a loser. It was because you forcibly suppressed the protagonist and the protagonist had no reason to appear. He had to let Ellie figure out her own solution, so she seemed to be a loser? The core point is that the protagonist cannot appear and has no sense of existence, rather than a certain state. Basically, you are going astray.
So does the protagonist's adoptive mother really not care?
Did the protagonist's adoptive mother just die like this? Or will she be resurrected later? After all, she still raised the protagonist.
Come to the factory, stop writing novels. After reading for a long time, you don't know who the main character is. If you don't want to write about the main character, don't write about it. The main character has disappeared and you still write nonsense. I haven't seen the main character in more than 10 chapters. Are all the comments just trustworthy? Really vomited
Not to mention that the protagonist is a cultivator, monks like us cannot afford to lose this face!
Is the protagonist's presence too weak?
Why is it that the more I read, the more redundant the protagonist becomes? The original ending of Honkai Impact III is already very good. The protagonist is the icing on the cake. Its function is to take away the knife. The author has to leave the knife behind and let the protagonist make up for it. What's the use of having a protagonist?
The author wants to know more about cultivating immortals. It's not your kind of collapse. You can touch it.
Can blood be freely given to others?! If this behavior were to be left in Marvel, the protagonist would never be able to get over it for the rest of his life. Do you need to fight so hard?