Global: I Am a Pathstrider, Blessed by a Ten-Star Aeon

The academy's setting of only admitting one student per year is just too unreasonable... Not only is it like what others are complaining about, making someone who has trained for ten days fight someone who has trained for a year, it's inevitable that they'll win unless they're from the Wind Spirit Moon Shadow Sect. There's also the issue of graduation.

Classic scene: mocked and then bet on the match Okay, now you can roll out of my bookshelf!

The author is quite clever; they added a five-second cooldown to a skill that has no cooldown when leveling it up.

Well, the protagonist clearly stated that his actions were unprecedented, like the level exams being the likes of which there would be no one before or since. Then, the way those characters talked gave the impression that they were being given the most amazing treatment imaginable, the kind of treatment few have received in all these years. So, why didn't they all get perfect scores?

Anyone with even a slight understanding of the game "Broken Iron" knows that a Fate Walker can only follow one path to the end. Where did you come from, a chosen one of the universe? Ten Star Gods watching you and giving you power? You think having multiple Fate Paths is a good thing? What kind of system or skill tree is Fate Path?

Speaking of destiny, I must remind you that the concept of the Star God, or destiny, is the goal, not the means. For example, there can be a God of War, but there will be no Star God of War. Because war is a means, not an end. The purpose of war can be destruction, gluttony, or maintaining order. I hope those of you who write about fate will understand this clearly.

The Fate Walker surprisingly did not implement the passive skill that makes them stronger through Fate.

Are you out of your mind? Don't waste your brains on people who need them. There was no buildup whatsoever before, and suddenly some aunt appears, and the Lin family too? Lin my ass, are you a foreigner? Don't you know that in China, only bloodlines matter?

It feels like the author is being unreliable. The protagonist isn't a Star Core Spirit; with ten Star Gods, there are countless potential conflicts in their destinies. Is the world-building even cosmic-level? The biggest problem with career-themed novels is the huge gap between the actual events and the established settings. Even at the finale, it's unclear if they've left Earth.

Using skills reduces maximum health, that's really awesome.