Konoha: Start the Tenseigan, Take over Team 7

**, I read Chapter 95. The protagonist was basically a human-skinned beast who cheated and had no emotions. It gave me the feeling that if someone stronger than him came out, he would run away on the spot. In Chapter 95, he directly cheated on himself, pretended to be another identity to rape Tsunade, threatened Tsunade with Shizune, and then he went along. It means that if there is such a person, the protagonist will really be cheated.

The start is shocking. I had 6 levels of abilities when I was a child. Why not unify the world directly? Still doing the mission? Pawn for others? It's not about money. I said the paper I used to shit on is worth 100 million. Who can object?

If the author didn't make the protagonist look like a psychopath, this book would have been good. I don't know why he had to write a novel character who looks like he was born and goes crazy from time to time? It's completely incomprehensible. Your previous madness was only aimed at the enemy. I endured it, but when the protagonist was threatened by Hidan with Hinata's life, the protagonist obviously had the ability to easily solve the problem, but he wanted to show his decisiveness in killing and deliberately attacked Hidan and seriously injured Hinata. Afterward, he said that it was none of my business and it was all Hidan's fault. There is also a woman who wears a mask and pretends to be a stranger and pretends to violate and scare him. In the process, Shizune is seriously injured. After so many episodes, it feels that the protagonist has been basically written out. The author wants to be unconventional, but he does not have enough ability to create a charismatic character. Using too much force will only be counterproductive. It is better to be conservative from the beginning and create a normal protagonist.

The author is, a stammerer, why do you always keep picking commas before finishing a sentence? I, really don't understand, why do you like to pick commas so much?

One bag of rice has to carry several floors, one bag of rice has to carry the second floor, one bag of rice has to be given too much, one bag of rice is washed by me, one bag of rice I washed so much mud, and the pile of black tiles, varkala, every piece of mud is mud, who will give you a bag of rice, spicy heavenly crab!

If you choose one of the three abilities of all realms, why don't you just choose a Zanpakutō and directly see the Eye of Jigu?

Ending: I'm sorry, Mr. XX, for not letting you use your full strength.

Let's change what Kakashi wants to do to the main character. It's boring.

Can you learn sentence fragmentation well before writing novels?

You are writing a Boruto biography in Shippuden, it is not combustible

You are so weak with your sword like fire.

Okay, okay, why is this so similar to the one by Gojo Satoru?

Can you please restrain your personality? Don't be too arrogant. Just be good when you should be good. I really can't tell the difference between the important and the important. I'm just like a child who hasn't grown up yet.

The protagonist is a sick pervert

I still can't bear the smell of fantasy coins from 20 years ago. No matter how strong the protagonist is and how terrifying his strength is, he will always be at a disadvantage in the eyes of others. He killed Hidan in seconds, and then Kakuzu said that Hidan was very good, so he came out and said that he could kill the protagonist in a few rounds, and then the protagonist killed Kakuzu in seconds. Then the protagonist shows Xiaonan the Qiudao Jade and Shinra Tenzheng, and Xiaonan says that Nagato can kill the protagonist indiscriminately. Then Itachi and Kisame came running again, and the protagonist blocked Kisame with one finger. Kisame said that the protagonist was a jerk. After killing Kisame, Itachi felt that he could beat the protagonist, and the audience around him didn't think that the protagonist was Itachi's opponent. No, buddy, when you wrote it, didn't you think that you might have some brain disease?

I feel like the protagonist's character is a bit crazy

I hope that the protagonist in the next chapter will not do anything about wearing a mask. It would be very **

The front looks fine, but what is written at the back? You have lost all your strength in the Blade Ruohuo. What is the difference between what you wrote and an ordinary little ninjutsu? You just say that the control power is not fully utilized just to be cool, which is okay, but you haven't applied any patches. Do you want to watch the original story of Yamamoto Genryusai Shigekuni and Ariha Bach fighting? Also remove the blur? It's okay as long as Habach is there. They already said it was the effect of the Static Blood Equipment. You wrote the flame as if it were a joke. In the original work, Mr. Yamamoto was surrounded by magma, and he still lifted the blur? A normal fight? I showed how much I like Liubian Ruohuo, and I have always wanted to get it, but in the end I got it like this. How about you get Kakarot's ability and then be kicked out by Conan Soccer. After reading the latest chapter, I really can't stand it anymore. Obito undoes the Hollow and fights the protagonist without even breaking a sweat. Lighter? If you can't control it, don't write about such a perverted ability.

Updates are slow and the content is watery. It only takes 5 chapters to fight Zabuza after two chapters a day. How can I keep reading this? I can barely accept it if you update more.

I feel like the author will make many people crazy if he writes in such a mentally disturbed state.

This protagonist gives me the feeling that he is sick

Let's not talk about anything else. I would not rank Hihu in front of the Sharingan even if I'm just in the right mind. Has this author really read the original work? Are the two comparable? Can you destroy a city with just one Hihu? Not to mention Susanoo's sword and cut off a mountain, even Amaterasu is much more powerful than one Hihu.

Terumi Mei: Are you just playing with me? Male protagonist: Just in heat

Some female ninjas can be resurrected. For example, Ye Cang, Uchiha Izumi, Nohara Lin, and Uchiha Hikaru.

Three thousand taels of gold is the salary of the little devil and the entire Kwantung Army? One tael of gold is equivalent to thirty or forty silver dollars. Three thousand taels of gold is equivalent to one hundred thousand oceans. Is the entire Kwantung Army only ten thousand people? And this is only ten yuan a month's military pay. For two countries, one hundred thousand oceans is nothing, can it be considered a loan? Does the author know how to read?

A very pure Fei Lu novel! Good reviews

Author, if you don't use commas, just put spaces. Others may think it's a system bug.

Much worse character than the prison master**

How does the author write a chapter that bans one chapter?

After observing two more chapters, I can only say that it has nothing to do with the author's book.