Jiangshi: Taking Concubines and Joining the Chat Group, Uncle Jiu Is Stunned

What the hell, Uncle Jiu will not accept you because you have no qualifications? Do you think Qiu Sheng and Wen Cai are qualified?

With Uncle Jiu's personality, even if you don't have the qualifications and don't accept you as a disciple, Uncle Jiu won't look like he dislikes you.

Stupid soul travel, it's not that I look down on soul travel, and if you travel as a soul to someone you haven't seen or have not seen in the original work, you might as well wear it

Many children, many blessings, the system has given the protagonist such a loser for nothing!

What qualifications do Wen Cai and Qiu Sheng have? Do they have any qualifications? There are pitfalls in the introduction

The writing is quite shady. The protagonist's understanding is incredible, but he still hasn't practiced the exercises for so long. I didn't want to read it when I saw it. When I saw Ren Fa died, I didn't want to read it anymore. The protagonist's understanding is incredible, he knows the future development, but he doesn't do anything or change anything. What the hell is that? There is no difference if there is a protagonist or not. Co-authoring this book is just a mess.

The poisonous point: soul penetration, I have a personal opinion on this, but I can't quite accept it. According to the author's description, women who chat with women have to be accepted, but look at what you wrote, their words and actions in chat women are just showing off in public. If all the members of the chat group are women, then it doesn't matter, but there are still men! Is this a cuckold? Maybe you really have a cuckold fetish. Look at the Zhiqiu Yiye you wrote about, how many times he molested female prostitutes?

Why do these authors like soul traveling so much now? Just expect good grades, *d is not

When you write a character, you have to specifically describe which version it is and which actor it is, which is actually quite jarring to watch. In fact, there is no need to emphasize it. Especially the martial arts characters, as described in the novel, are actually much better looking than the actors. The most important thing is that if you write that a certain character looks the same as a certain version of the actor, then you will more deliberately emphasize the falseness of the character.

The introduction reminds me of a question, no matter how unqualified the protagonist is, Qiusheng, a literary and talented person, is it that they don't have the qualifications?