Let You Write Martial Arts! Do You Write Voyage: Wang Lufei?

Why does a ** like Luffy have so many fans?

Kerby is not lovable to begin with, don't wash him

Is the author planning to turn Oden Mi into a truly good man, or is he planning to make Wang Lufei his enemy? But don't help that stupid b as in the original work, that would be too poisonous. There is also Momonosuke, who must either be killed or completely change his character.

For example: The scene where the Mysterious Group rescues the little master at the Sanxiaomen, and the protagonist wakes up and runs to pick up his sister, gave me a feeling of Luffy rescuing Ace in One Piece. It was too delayed! Some scenes are even repeated several times, and the expressions and psychological descriptions of the characters are also repeated many times, which seems to be sensational. The key is to write as you write. It creates the illusion that a long time has passed. At this time, the protagonist has the feeling of "Diao Chan is on the way here", which is so uncomfortable!

The title has the feeling of "you are asked to cut the patient's appendix, but you amputate the patient's leg and others praise your skills"!

I thought it was Takuya Kanbara

In fact, I'm more curious about how to adapt the plot of bidding farewell to the Merry in the future. After all, he is now a knight riding a horse.

A big shortcoming of this book is that in order to fill some small holes, it dug a bigger hole. In fact, there are many absurd and bizarre things in martial arts. Some weird and unreasonable things can better reflect the imagination of the protagonist. Everything is rationalized and the original meaning is lost.

Didn't the Bandit King say that Donghai would be his protector? Luffy even wanted to die several times and still didn't come out. . . Are you still thinking that the Bandit King can predict the future? You can see that he is not dead and ignore him.

I feel like I can change the name "The Best Swordsman in the World" to "The Best Swordsman in the World". It's true that even if you're a martial artist and you're a swordsman, it's not very good. I'd like to make an opinion.

When I saw the book title introduction on the home page, I thought I was messing around. Is a martial arts novel about One Piece? Finally, I came in and saw the introduction. Author, you are such a damn talent.

What I like about this book is that the protagonist doesn't have much real life, it's just a story, there isn't much intrigue and intrigue.

Why not write the part where Smoker resists the Five Old Stars? If this is not written, then he is just a passerby, and then he really has no charm at all.

Are these vines of yours wrapped around by Tang Shenwang's biological mother? It's so difficult to cut, so you choose to chop off the legs rather than the vines.

I have a suggestion about the Sun God. Why can't the free will of the original free drum be turned into the martial arts will cultivated by Luffy and integrated into the fruit secret book? Isn't it strange that a great master of martial arts has a martial will? It's better than the theory of destiny that comes with the fruit, and it can be integrated in the opposite direction

The audience is so **, like real Feilu readers, they can only read Long Aotian's short stories

Seeing the national destiny and the performance makes me want to vomit

The emperor of the Ming Dynasty was the backer of the eunuchs. Without the emperor, they were nothing.

It means that Yue Bu** and Lin Pingzhi are from Swordsman of Jianghu, so the question is, did Jin Yong write Swordsman of Jianghu five years ago and then spread it to the big screen? Hey-hey

Ma Ning has gone home, but the author hasn't come home yet

If I remember correctly, the Taoist later became the Great Sun Tathagata of Buddhism. He was the predecessor of Tathagata Buddha. How could he not be considered successful and famous? How could he not be considered to have made a breakthrough in the world?

Enmmm** I just want to ask if there was an imperial edict in the pre-Qin Dynasty? ? ? And you, a bunch of literate people,

It is the fairy stone that existed in Huaguo Mountain at the beginning of the creation of heaven and earth.

Yun author, Beloberg Because the star core is like spring all year round? Every Grand Guardian must protect the star core? Lived in Bengbu...

Now I plan to poison the Jia family to suck their blood. You can stand by and ignore them or help them for a fee, but if you take the initiative to let them suck their blood for free, if you feel uncomfortable, then I can **. There are many Siheyuan novels, and you are just one of them. In Feilu, where Shuangwen gathers, novels that make people uncomfortable have no future.

I kind of know why the author's book is not popular. You are completely ** our strength comparison. Well, the strongest one in the navy should be Garp. Garp's strength will not weaken due to age. And you, a general, are too powerful. Is it a cabbage to be a general?

And can you be a little more serious? Although it's quite funny, it's boring to keep doing this, and it's a bit off-putting.

Why do the Spurs always play dirty tricks? Can't the Lakers send someone to eliminate Duncan? It's not pleasant to see. If you don't fight back, this kind of thing will happen more and more in the future. You will directly destroy the best person on the other side. Let's see who dares to play dirty tricks next time.

I laughed. It's really powerful for a grand Dao to snatch a child's weapon. He wants everything. Do you know what Dao is? Is the Dao of all worlds the end? Did Hongmeng say anything? I want to know if there are women in Dao. You are now a Dao and can open a vast world. You are not as good as Pangu.

When will Bai Lulan, Gray Touko, Xiao Juer and the others appear?