
Konoha: After Retirement, Namikaze Minato Begged Me to Come Out
木叶:退休后,波风水门求我出山
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- Fanfiction
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- Anime Fanfiction
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- For men
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The third Hokage was an Uchiha, so I tolerated it. At least I had a disciple who could replace the upper-ranking Uchiha Kage. The reason why I secretly plotted against the second generation and all the disciples of the second generation was that I could comfort myself. But you damn well knew that Obito's fate had changed, and you caught up with it yourself, but you actually sat back and watched Obito's darkening for the sake of Nohara Rin, and didn't take any remedial measures. Forget it for Nohara Rin, she is still a beauty, but you are not good enough, so what are you trying to do? So he ran away to live in seclusion, and even went to a nook and cranny, euphemistically called hiding love debts? A dead eunuch with a pig's trotters, and a fart love debt? Then tmd is ancient times, not modern monogamy, will you die if you have both? At the same time, the characters of several women are also like shit. The village that the admiring man once protected is now in danger of being destroyed. As a result, you just sit back and watch the show, waiting to see if the pig's feet will come back? Moreover, he is said to be the head of a big family, but in the end he only views the overall situation and views on love? Are you still disciplining your family not to do anything? There are too many flaws, and I just want to say, what a bastard author.
I'm really speechless about these two original heroines.
As long as the second generation let Uchiha become Hokage, I can tell how good your writing is.
The writing is incomprehensible. I want the protagonist to rely on other people to support him and become the king. As a result, none of the younger generation knows the protagonist. It's really funny. The ninja doesn't know the information of the Third Hokage to be a **** ninja. There is no logic at all, several original characters have been added, and the emotional scenes are even worse. Except for Uchiha's third-generation Hokage gimmick, the rest relies on the defense! !
Here's a suggestion, don't write a male protagonist with low emotional intelligence.
When did genetic science become chemistry? This is biology, right?
Author, please make two berserk forms. Knights who can't go berserk have no souls.
The score is so low, unexpectedly, The author's imagination is pretty good. The girls are very weird, both Uchiha and Hinata are not lovable, honestly speaking, they are not as good as Mikoto Shina. The fact that the virginity of an old virgin in her fifties was broken, and the fact that the protagonist seems to have lost her virginity even after he is over 60 is very outrageous! !
Feilu Novel 7.3, Kid, you are invincible
It should be impossible for the second generation to choose Uchiha. It is probably impossible for the second generation to choose Uchiha even for Danzo.
I'm willing to give up on beating a weak chicken for more than ten chapters.
This means that the protagonist's exam is completely equivalent to copying the answers. Wouldn't he be dumbfounded once he understands the question process? I haven't learned anything at all and can only copy the answers.
Although Feilu's grading rules have been changed, not all good books and L books will be rated 10 points, but the scores are all above 9 points. You can only say that this is an L book among L books.
Should the name be so casual?
I think it might be more interesting if the main character is named Taejun
If the author's protagonist doesn't have the same personality as Zuo Lengchan, then he won't dominate Jinghai City. If he doesn't have the same personality as Zuo Lengchan, then the ending will be great.
Author, how do you plan to write the story of the linkage between the True Swordsman and the Imperial Cavalry, as well as the 199 Heroes' Final Battle and the Super Hero War Chronicles? And when you write the plot of the past life, can you change their names to Mi Universe's names, and also change the plot a little bit, otherwise it will be really easy to get into trouble. Those who know it think you wrote Mi Universe's past life, and those who don't know think you wrote Mi Universe's Toei. In the end, can you write more about the plot between Crying and Taifu? I'm addicted to both of them.
The main character has become the only hidden profession. Why hasn't his attributes changed to the only hidden profession?
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In 1968, did China have the Internet?
Was your math taught by your physical education teacher this time? How many pieces of 100 are in 100,000 yuan? How much does 1 million kilograms of pork cost? 25 Per pound.
How should I put it? It's been a long time since I last read your novel. It's not that the quality is bad, but I don't know why I felt sleepy while reading it. . . The settings and characters are fine, but they may be too detailed. It makes me want to sleep more and more. It would be better to change the settings to something that can be both cumbersome and simplified. . . Nowadays, there are more and more tj novels. It is impossible to read them unless they are updated to a certain extent.
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Author, your next movie should be a high-profile one! Otherwise, it is really a bit bland. There is really no shortage of high-burning scenes in "Beng San Bang Two". "Bang Two" has a strong narrative and the characters serve the plot. It can really reflect the feeling of doomsday, and there is no shortage of high-burning scenes. If you continue to play Beng San next, it is best to start with the Queen's Advent and end with the last lesson, otherwise the subsequent plots of Meteor in the Sky and Sinner's Elegy will have no beginning or end and will be difficult to deal with.
I'm in a book shortage. Can anyone recommend a novel with more plot about Demon King?
This is the third Siheyuan women's novel I've read so far.