Tomb Raiding: More Children, More Blessings, and I Shock Yin Xinyue from the Start

Since the protagonist is a warlord, he'll definitely have to fight for supremacy and become the most powerful one to unify China later on. Otherwise, he might end up siding with someone else.

The way they address each other is really problematic. Calling one's husband "Mr." And one's wife "Madam" (using her surname plus "Madam") feels like treating someone else's wife directly. Shouldn't two women, both married to the same man, address each other as sisters, or at least by their first names? Instead, they're using terms like "First Concubine" and "Second Concubine."

The start is amazing! Everyone else is tied up by bandits, but when the protagonist goes to rescue them, he's still a virgin... That's completely unrealistic. In reality, he'd be gang-raped by a hundred or so people in no time.

I'm speechless. This Feng Hou Qi Men Dun Jia method, which doesn't involve Feng Shui or fortune telling, looks incredibly awkward.

Can't you address your wife in a more normal way? Who calls their wife "Mrs. Yin"? Calling her "Second Concubine" is a bit odd. Just calling her by her name is much more normal.

He only robbed one tomb, then started rambling on and on. He didn't actually rob any tombs; he's just a wolf in sheep's clothing selling meat.

Can you please stop using that "fuck you" nonsense all the time? Aside from Zhang Zuolin and Zhang Zongchang, most of the warlords in the Republic of China who had any real power were cultured individuals. Many not only held official titles from feudal times but were also graduates of prestigious modern universities, and quite a few had studied abroad.

It's getting more and more boring. It's all about women and no plot development. I'm losing patience. Don't you know you get tired of it? Don't you know you'll get bored after a while?

Saying the protagonist was a bandit from western Hunan seems like stepping on someone's taboo. They don't even understand the meaning of "warlord" before arbitrarily bestowing this title—how ridiculous! He was neither an active-duty military officer nor a government official at the time; his organized armed force could only be an illegal force, i. E., Bandits.

Are tomb raiding novels now considered fantasy? Isn't the traditional bloodline and martial arts style good enough? On Feilu now, you can't even spend a single penny to buy a decent book.