The Collector of Hogwarts

I was born in China, but I yearn for America. I finally left the land that raised me and went to the free country. Even if I can't go now, I will go one day. I hope you can remember that my name is Dongfeng 41 strategic nuclear missile

The plot goes by too fast. You would call it a fun story. It's not fun. It's obviously not fun to watch, but it just feels like you haven't watched anything at all. Without the system, it feels like a running account. There is no highlight.

It is civilized and easy to crack down on sending women to women.

Either keep calling me Kyle or keep calling me Kai Li, don't mix them.

Author, you either let the protagonist and the narrator be called Kael'thas, or you make them all named Li Kai, the dialogue is called Kael'thas, and the narrator is called Li Kai. In this way, you won't feel uncomfortable when you read it and we readers will feel uncomfortable. But you won't read it or check it after you finish writing? How lazy are you?

Your system can be detected by Dumbledore. What do you think, author?

Ms. Ka's personality is gone, and the reward content seems to be empty shells and title-based content.

No matter how you embellish it, in essence, the Navy is the gatekeeper and thug of the Tianlong people. Without the Navy, the Tianlong people would have been exterminated ten thousand times.

It's too cerebral. I feel like I dare to write a novel after reading the fanfic. Nico was already cerebral enough. He also said that Muggles are not curses. I suggest you read the original novel. Mudbloods and Muggles are both curses to ordinary people, but they are considered neutral to wizards, because wizards as a whole have contempt and fear for ordinary people.

I really don't want to say that it was obviously good in the early stage, but it fell apart later on. To be honest, I really liked the previous plot. Author, your book collapsed after you wrote it. I feel like this book is going to be scrapped. Sometimes I really want to ask the author, what kind of world view do you want to expand? Just write it according to the original plot of Harry Potter, and then write some original plot in the middle, such as daily love. It is a good suggestion that the author can change it, or start another book. Don't write like this.

The author has an idea. Doesn't the protagonist like to collect? Then the Dark Lord Voldemort can also be used as a collection. After all, it has brought fear to the wizarding world for decades. The protagonist can beat Voldemort to the ground in front of the whole school, put him in a cage and use it as a collection, and put it there for others to visit and see the style of the second generation Dark Lord.

I am reading both this book and the one about asking to drop out of school. Obviously, this book is far inferior to that one in terms of rhythm control, and the results can also be explained very well. The most attractive part of the Harry Potter fandom is obviously studying at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, and everything else is just an add-on. In other words, the main plot must be schooling, and it must be from first grade to at least fifth or sixth grade. The events encountered must also be changed step by step without overly affecting the logic of the main plot. In this regard, it is obvious that this book is basically off the line. The plot is so crazy that it is difficult to logically return to the main line of going to school. It also introduces its own "original" content rather bluntly, making it seem more and more nondescript.

My brother is probably tired, and today's update is so perfunctory. If he has such an attitude, it would be better not to update at all. It seems that I am just making some unreasonable troubles. My brother is usually so free and easy, but it is just a pain for my sister-in-law. I should be content with reading one chapter a day, lest my brother say that I'm a little bratty again.

In fact, the best part of this book is the setting. It's a world where games are respected. There's no one in the world who studies games as well as you. So you're a real NPC.

It feels a bit frustrating to watch, can you feel a little better?

If you don't push it, we will despise you together, haha

In the latest chapter, I am seeking death. I don't even understand the seal, but I want to release the sealed demon! If it can be solved, the church will not just be sealed!

Aren't you embarrassed to look at people who are labor-capital?

The protagonist takes a photo of a plainclothes policeman who is conducting an anti-narcotics investigation, and sends it directly to the police's mobile phone without coding the photo. Cow cow cow

Have to. I don't want to read the book you reviewed. And even the title on the introduction makes me not want to read it. The first Grandmaster can upgrade to a Grandmaster sub-profession for free in half a year. I was like, "Grandmaster is so worthless, why do you still call me Grandmaster?" Your proficiency bonus is about the same, right?

The protagonist's surname is Cao, why is he a big man? How about calling him Wei?

One thing to say, the financial system of wizards is really bad. If you have money, wouldn't it be nice to exchange it for gold or gems, and then exchange gold and gems for gold galleons? Gringotts accepts gold and gems. How stupid is it to exchange them for pounds? And now, it's not much.

You don't need to read the third volume at all, angels and demons are out

I remember that before there was no surveillance, a neighbor's girl was robbed in front of her house.

You're already a black man, so why don't you make a parenthesis and say "white"? Isn't Xuan Jia black armor?

Are there only two heroines? Are there others?

It feels like it's a bit watery now.

May I ask how many times the title of this book has been changed?

This is another exposure article, so the indigenous people have some influence.

Blind guessing that the plot of the eighth life is a battle between two emperors