Comprehensive Comic: People Are in Xingyue, Summoning Bai Qiandai at the Beginning

The male protagonist is a native of his country, but he is the same as Asasi in his childhood. I don't like the protagonist's personality.

With this star wishing invincibility item, you can become invincible 3 times a day. Whoever you want can die. Why not make a wish to purify the evil in this world from the Holy Grail? Doesn't it mean that you can make a wish to destroy the world? To put it bluntly, it is now broken.

Let me ask a question, what level of Noble Phantasm is the cold wind in Fuyuki City? Can you actually freeze a crown-level being into that shape? Are all the citizens of Fuyuki City gods? He hasn't frozen to death yet!

When I first watched it, I wondered if it would be so vicious later on. When I first came here, I had to bear the sin on myself. How could I feel guilty about killing a murderer? Doesn't the author think that writing this way will make the protagonist appear great and upright? Who wants to read a neurotic novel about a disease-free person? Let alone killing a murderer, it is very reasonable and normal in the novel to plot and murder unrelated people for oneself. People are selfish, as long as they are not crazy about killing people for fun.

Chapter 112 is really funny. Does the protagonist need other people's approval? Just like Gem Man, it is the Clock Tower that wants to respect him, the second magic user, as the magic marshal, thereby improving the status of the clock tower, but not that he needs the position of the magic marshal in the clock tower to prove that he is the second magic user!

Good guy, I played 170 cards in 4 games. I would like to call you the God of Water.

Didn't your male protagonist's transformation into a heroic spirit bring any benefits to his physical fitness?

Moreover, the author's description of the protagonist is quite bad. It's just made up of several templates. The various conflicts in the characters' personalities completely lack a three-dimensional image.

Xiaobai writes whatever comes to mind, not even mentioning the logic of anime and not even following his own logic, just writing whatever comes to mind.

It's an abstract plot, and the protagonist's strength can be compared to his own.

My granddaughter is in danger and I can't even find out! What about the spiritual consciousness of cultivators?

If you want to get the throne, you must first have a king's stomach. People without a king's stomach are not eligible to inherit the throne.

Is it still a eunuch on the shelves? If it is, it will be the eunuch protagonist.

In the previous chapters, the one who said he was afraid of the cold right after he fucked the protagonist, I suggest you change it. I know that you are going to write about the relationship development with the Lion King, but at the time it seemed that it was really unbearable. Also, I saw in the comments that it said about killing old bugs. I suggest you change it too. How can you kill an idiot and howl like he's going to die? Change it to be killed but not afraid of it, because this thing has to destroy its "life box" just like the lich. In the end, it would be better if you watch the protagonist destroy the Tori family before despairing. Originally, the later writing was okay, but if you put these plots in the first few chapters, it would be really easy to make people unable to hold their nerves.

Extremely poisonous! Such strong strength is still submissive! ! He even makes excuses saying it's a strategy and doesn't even dare to do small things!

A crocodile weighing more than ten meters weighs one pound more. Is it made of cotton?

Check the author's elementary school. I suspect he was frightened at that time, otherwise he wouldn't be so obsessed with loli.

Since **Jade Pavilion can have the damage of the Rock King Emperor's full blow, why didn't he kill the demon god who only recovered 90% of his strength? Back then, he was sealed with a rock gun for thousands of years. Now, the **Jade Pavilion that the Rock King Emperor could damage with a full blow could not kill the demon god? What the hell kind of setting is this?

Are there any other special shots besides armor, mask, and Ultra?

The first part is quite heartwarming, and I feel that the author has put in a lot of hard work. Later in the X-Men part, the professor is the world's top biology professor, Hank is the world's top all-round scientist, and the technology of X Academy is half a century ahead of the world... He was laughed at and teased by Lorna and Twinkle for being uneducated... It couldn't be ghostwriting, right?

I really don't understand the intention of some authors to write prehistoric novels to discredit Nuwa? Is there anything that Nuwa can do to the human race? Don't say that he doesn't care about the life or death of the human race. In the prehistoric world, saints are not invincible. If there hadn't been Nuwa behind the human race, they would have been exterminated long ago.

Don't read it, his title is completely deceptive and has nothing to do with the content.

Why are there no more pornographic chapters?

Who is stronger, Saitama or the protagonist?

Use the small universe to develop new superpowers to remove the Deno gene from the human body of the earth in that world!

They've already landed on the moon, but they still look like they're mentally retarded and have cerebral palsy.

I can't hold myself any longer This is the background of the story where Penicillin is soaked in turkey. This wave of anger appeared decades before this era, and it even appeared more than 100 years ago. It was all invented by you, and you didn't post it like this.

I hope you have a few more happy May Day pictures every day

I was confused when I saw the second picture, what kind of article

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