Hogwarts' Collecting Demon King

The plot goes by too fast. You would call it a fun story. It's not fun. It's obviously not fun to watch, but it just feels like you haven't watched anything at all. Without the system, it feels like a running account. There is no highlight.

Either keep calling me Kyle or keep calling me Kai Li, don't mix them.

He actually asked Dumbledore to use the Killing Curse, which is already a bit of nonsense. He doesn't use black magic, and he can also destroy Horcruxes with other things. Why do you listen to the protagonist and feel like he is written like an old man who doesn't understand anything?

Author, you either let the protagonist and the narrator be called Kael'thas, or you make them all named Li Kai, the dialogue is called Kael'thas, and the narrator is called Li Kai. In this way, you won't feel uncomfortable when you read it and we readers will feel uncomfortable. But you won't read it or check it after you finish writing? How lazy are you?

I saw it on March 8th. I overestimated my capabilities and expanded my world view crazily. Look, I couldn't control it after just one month! Do you really think of yourself as a platinum author? Even those platinum masters spend hundreds of chapters slowly expanding their world view. You have grown so big all of a sudden, you are screwed.

Your system can be detected by Dumbledore. What do you think, author?

Hermione's character needs to be revised. It's really not popular. She wants to lecture on everything she sees. It's really annoying.

Let's give the protagonist a black dragon as a mount. That would be so handsome. At least it's much more handsome than riding a broom. Brothers who agree, give me a thumbs up.

Myrtle wore glasses to watch the basilisk die.

Because of British pigs. It does not castrate