
Comprehensive Manga: Yakumo Murasaki Makes a Contract, Meets Her Son and Wants to Live Together?
综漫:契约八云紫,见子求同居?
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- Ongoing
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- 714k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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9.9 · 3.8kScore
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I can't find the cool part. The two former servants Yakumo Purple and Tamamo are left alone. The protagonist fights by himself. It's only seconds anyway. The plot of showing off to others is too bland. There are too few descriptions of the characters' reactions. The author can't think of the meaning of Tamamo and Yakumo Purple's existence. While talking about how strong Tamamo is, he keeps the servants as vases. He finally makes a move, but it's over in the blink of an eye. The character didn't even react, otherwise the protagonist would crush him first, and then let the servants come out to finish it off. It was just plain and simple, with or without it. It felt like all the characters in the author's book had experienced world wars, and they didn't react at all when they saw supernatural powers. You want to say that this is a fusion of the world of magic. The problem is that ordinary characters in the daily world don't know it, and they are not surprised when they see the strength of the protagonist.
How should I put it? It's a typical waste of food and a pity to abandon. To give a simple example, the protagonist got the bloodline at the beginning and waited for more than ten chapters before integrating it. The reason was that he finally felt the danger. It's outrageous. Why did you go there earlier? It's true that you have no brains. There are a lot of feelings in the whole text that I don't even know if I have any brains. It's just that the main plot comes out as I think and it's completely random. But the good thing is that there is really no poisonous point, but it's not exciting either. The plot is bland and there are a lot of characters interspersed with it, but there is no description. If I hadn't read them all, I wouldn't even know what you are writing about.
Little knowledge: Yakumo Purple is a realm demon, not a gap demon. The gap quality is an incidental ability. After all, the shikigami Yakumo Blue can also use the gap. Yakumo Purple is mainly a realm demon. One person is a clan of monsters.
The author doesn't need to write about the outer god Naiathos. He can just write about Naiako. It's quite cute.
The writing style is very average and uninteresting. The more I read, the more boring it becomes. Many parts are unreasonable and I don't understand the selection of girls. They are not as good as the comprehensive comic Superman Night Breeze. You can just watch the paid one. The writing style is too ordinary.
I want 200,000 tons of companions
It seems that Yakumo Purple still has the power of realm?
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