Dream of the Red Chamber: I Become a Sage in the Red Chamber

First, if I were a born saint with real power, I definitely wouldn't live in the Ning and Rong mansions; I'd fear the gloom there would disturb my cultivation. Secondly, if I absolutely had to live in the Jia mansion, wouldn't I at least have to clean the courtyard?

Having lived two lives, he's still pretending to be an innocent virgin. I'm speechless. He's giving away two maids and he's still so unwilling. **Hey!**

The premise isn't very appealing. The protagonist is born a saint, certified by the court and universally recognized, someone even the emperor has to respect. There's basically no main storyline for leveling up; it's like starting at the peak with no further advancement. Moreover, the protagonist's template is too disjointed, with no way to go beyond rebellion and independence.

If you're going to collect characters, then collect them already. Why write 13 or 14 and leave it at that? The main plot is completely unclear, the timeline isn't progressing, and you've just wasted a bunch of words. By the time it's published, Lin Daiyu has only met the protagonist three or four times, and they're both already in their early teens. What are you doing?

Haha, the author is truly amazing, always enjoying what others have already used! Maybe even more so, enjoying others cheating on the author. You say you were too late in time travel! It's one thing if you couldn't steal the role, but you were reincarnated decades ago! You know it's *Dream of the Red Chamber*, yet you let those women follow the old paths.

No, didn't they know they were trying to steal Qin Keqing's thunder? Why did they have to force her to marry someone else?

I'm a bit confused about what happens next. It only describes the plot of Dream of the Red Chamber. It's better to include other film and television dramas, because writing only about garden plays is difficult and the results are generally mediocre. So I'm thinking about whether to incorporate other film and television works, or to write Dream of the Red Chamber as a standalone story. The protagonist travels to other worlds Feel free to share your thoughts.

It's basically reasonable. Lady Wang, Jia She, and others still show respect for the protagonist, unlike some other Dream of the Red Chamber novels where the protagonist is already a duke or prince, yet Lady Wang and Jia She still mindlessly mock and scheme against him—that's illogical. In the original work, even the Grand Eunuch Dai Quan was fawned over by the Jia family.

Commentary on Chapter 16 of "Dream of the Red Chamber: I Became a Saint in the Red Chamber" by San Tian Liang Tou Pao: What Will Be the Future of the Jia Family?

Commentary on Chapter 17 of "Dream of the Red Chamber: I Became a Saint in the Red Chamber" by San Tian Liang Tou Pao: Let Yuan Chun Leave the Palace?