You Asked for a Simulated Crime, But You Tell Tragic Ghost Stories

Chapter 12 uploaded today failed to pass the review. The reason was that I overexaggerated the murderer and made it too evil and perverted. Even after revising it several times as required, it still didn't work. The young author didn't even know how to write it. 1. This murderer is the simplest of the evils of human nature among the several cases in my mind. There are several more perverted murderers behind me, but I can't get through this kind of plot. How will I write later. 2. When the murderer committed the crime, I left inference details in the conversation between the murderer and the victim, and I also left some tiny foreshadowings at the scene for use in the inference. 3. There are also some foreshadowings of the victim's case. In the previous article, the chapters were revised so harshly that I don't even know how to smooth things over. 4. The original intention of writing this book is to discuss the evil of human nature. I can't even write this storyline. If it can pass the review, you will find a reversal, but the evil people are no longer evil. I don't know how to modify the chapters. If you have any ideas, you can put them forward to the author so that the author can improve them.

This book is a bit slow, I hope everyone will like it. The author also knows that this book is poorly written. The protagonist does not take off at the beginning, and there is no harem or emotional drama. Even the protagonist disappears at the end of the writing. It is all the supporting characters who are acting out. The author is also a little distressed. I hope this book can last until the author finishes writing the few original cases he thought of. After all, it is for love. Later, the author will improve the comments raised by readers and friends. Thank you for your support.

About Detective Oyama's book Let's Simulate Crime! You Tell Tragic and Strange Stories" Chapter 4 "National Police Vigilance" (4) Chapter Review.

Continuing from the previous post: 5. Let me give you a rough idea. The first case is God. Can he redeem me? Is it the murderer or the victim who is redeemed? Does the murderer deserve God's salvation? Does the victim deserve God's salvation? This is the first case, I will write about the viciousness in human nature; The second case is light, is it really hope? Yes, it is the light of the sun, which is the beginning of vitality for all things. Light can bring vitality and death. This is the second case; The third case is: Is heaven really sacred? Yes, it is the paradise of Western belief, but this is a story that takes place in the countryside. Paradise really exists, so why does it bring death. This is the third case; The fourth case is human beings. How evil are they? Yes, he is that normal person walking around, but this person's viciousness has no limits and is so ugly that it will refresh your outlook on life. This is the fourth case. I started writing this book just because I had this idea. As a result, the first murderer was not tried.