Pokemon: I’m Famous for Taking on Disciples!

After reading some, I didn't find that the apprentice's qualifications are of any use. Is there any difference between the monster level and ordinary people? Looking at the previous content, it doesn't make any difference whether the protagonist is a receipt* or an apprentice! Find a high-quality elf protagonist, give the protagonist a qualification-improving medicine, and give the protagonist multiple experience cards! What is the role of this apprentice? Serve tea and water? Compared with other elf novels, it just changes the protagonist's leveling content into an apprentice, and the protagonist's elf reaches full level directly.

The subject matter itself is good, but the author doesn't seem to realize what's really good about it. Except for the first few chapters, the rest are all hydrology!!! According to the author's current writing method, it is just hanging the sheep's head to sell *meat, oh no, at most it is the little bit of skin of the sheep's head, the part that really touches the topic and really attracts me, there is only a little bit at the beginning, this is one of them; Secondly, the author's writing style is really speechless. I really don't want to scold him, but he really understands everything. He forces himself to count the words and shows off his meager and pitiful poetry storage in primary and secondary schools. Also, the author's setting up of the characters in the novel is weird, messy and abnormal. It is normal for a general who has been rescued to thank his benefactor, but why should he kneel down or kneel on one knee? Is this a sign of gratitude? How does this feel like a pledge of allegiance! This kind of brainless and slap-in-the-face plot is disgusting, but the author still wants to write it, and the key point is that it is full of loopholes! In the previous scene where the eldest apprentice was registered for a competition in the gym, the person who took the initiative to provoke him was already a king-level trainer. How could he be so brainless? As a top combat force, he is so cerebral?! Giant baby?! What's really good about this subject matter, doesn't the author understand?! It's like choosing sesame seeds and losing watermelon! Look at the title of your book, Elf + Apprentice, you should focus on how the apprentice is doing. When I saw the title of the book, what I thought of was how the protagonist's apprentice was doing under the guidance of the protagonist in the context of the urban elf, rather than a bunch of stinky beasts written by the author now. There are too many flaws. This is the first time I have written so many book reviews. . .

I hope it's not a plot that's being questioned. Being strong is just for others to talk to me politely instead of being questioned.

You are not in your own world. Don't write any plot about the rise and fall of a country. You are not from the same world. If you are reading a novel and insist on writing it like this, do you really have no plot? Make money to do things. Did the protagonist live in that world since he was a child? The sense of immersion is very ex

It looks like he has never played Pokémon before.

The protagonist's character at the beginning is very unlikable.

In fact, I think the author's writing is pretty good and I can't completely deny the efforts of others, so I hope the author can work harder! Each chapter could be longer and the book could be better written! Come on, author!

Shi, the plot of a brainless pretentious slap in the face, the subject matter is very good, you can still watch it without writing these plots, what kind of plot is written, a king comes to look for trouble like a ****, the background of your book shows that the status of the king is quite high, has he never seen a woman, how did he become the king of such a ****.

Can Shen Nong really evaluate the content? If someone has the strength to provoke someone and waits for the other person to finish speaking and then writes something with inner disdain, I won't pursue it. The strength is for everyone to talk to me calmly. If they provoke, then flip the table. Why are some big bosses very down-to-earth but no one provokes? It's because they directly go back and arrange for provocative people.

Another urban elf, very hungry