Mistaken by Zongman: My Kevin Template Joins the Chat Group

Please be realistic For example, in Chapter 9, it is impossible for the God of Beauty to take a look at you, because the soul of modern people cannot be so dazzling. According to the saying, if you want your soul to shine dazzlingly, you must be very pure. For example, you must be so bad that your bones are black and shiny, and you are good enough that your bones are white and shiny. You should know what kind of people are in today's society, even if you have a golden finger. The golden finger only provides an increase in strength, but does not change you. If you change your soul, you will not be you. Even your thoughts will be closer to the person you imitate. And if the Kevin in this article can reach the level of Beng 3, it is indeed the soul that will illuminate the world of beauty, but he in this article cannot achieve it at all.

涉嫌辱华的是我英作者，同人小说并不能一概而论，不了解真实情况，不要恶意中伤其他无关人和他们的作品

I would like to give some suggestions to the author. The subject matter he wrote was great at the beginning, and it has been followed by many anime, such as Holy Grail, Ancestor, God Killer, etc., Without any violation. But the male protagonist must not participate as a heroic spirit. His status is higher than that of all gods. Transforming into a heroic spirit would be too awkward, just like the master of a world becoming a familiar. It would be as funny. Second, Britain should be transformed into an independent small world, separated from the timeline, and retained as a god. This is the pattern. Think about it, if you eliminate any knight at random and appear in the Holy Grail, everyone will be comparable to a heroic spirit. This would be consistent with the hero's status as a god-king.

Author, if you delete the chat**, it will improve the look and feel of the book to a higher level. Seriously, why don't you just delete the chat**? I'll definitely keep chasing you this way

Have you written too many Dragon King stories? The opening taste is so strong

You met Hestia a month ago, and waited for Hestia to speak for a month before joining. If Hestia never speaks, will you just stay as a bartender? I won't be able to adjust the game at the beginning. I will join one month early tomorrow and enable the plug-in early. I will have one more month of development time to quickly reach the second level. I can't understand the author's inexplicable idea and waste a month.

As far as the subject matter is concerned, I personally like it, but the author's control of plot rhythm, character description and intensity can be said to be vague. The character OOC has appeared. I haven't seen the latest chapter yet, but the collapse of combat power is already foreseeable. Putting Skyfire on the shelves may be a good choice in terms of plot rhythm, but you have to consider which level the protagonist should reach.

The cuts were too severe. If it really meant destroying history, wouldn't it be as difficult to hit someone as a son?

There is a template system, why write chat**? It's unnecessary, and I really like live broadcasts. It looks very awkward. What's the benefit? Apart from pretending to be cool, I also pretend to be very embarrassed.

Are you sure the author is not in the cloud? It made me speechless, who had seen the wrong things.

There is nothing particularly pretentious about this novel, but it just feels very bland, and the protagonist is basically single-player. But I really don't understand your Qingmei setting. If you want to accept it, why would you write a female copper? If you say you don't want to accept it, you might as well just get a man to come up, you

I only updated one chapter this day. It's too slow. I'm really tired of waiting.

The author does have a lot of private stuff, but the quality of the plot is good, please support it with comments

It's been a hundred or two hundred chapters and it hasn't been opened yet. He's probably a eunuch.

Shinomiya Kaguya directly married someone she didn't know, and her memory was also changed. It's so miserable.

To be honest, all those things invented before were combined to create a spacecraft. He has flown out long ago. There are so many techniques in the front, even a monster can't be defeated.

The plot is roughly the same as Manslaughter 2.

Not enough. . . I want to tie the author to update. . .

No one has written about Bucky as the main character? I think it would be interesting to write about Bucky improving his strength.

If you don't have talent, you can give him any skills and he won't be very good. Unless you can give him a system, you can give those women who have no talent some use for powerful skills. Otherwise, all those great sects of cultivating immortals will be awesome.

I can sleep really well, time is calculated day by day, chatting is almost useless, the first batch of people who entered the ** have not said a few words, and the second batch of ** will join in a few days, your chatting ** is really just chatting, compared to the world view of Hakoba, the protagonist, lv1 grinds dozens of chapters, just writing day by day, the protagonist who has tens of millions of words is not strong enough to be the younger brother of Izayoi, and he is sitting on a helicopter while you crawl on the ground.

I'm going to make a big deal out of it. Anyway, no matter who it is, I'll kill them indiscriminately. I'll kill them if they're kind, if they're grudges, I'll kill them, if they're passers-by, I'll kill them. Little Japan is more suitable for the author because there are more people with psychopaths.

The author can add a little bit about the popularity of Black Basket, okay?

National treasure agent? It's written like a joke. You are bald and strong, but Big Gray Wolf is better than this.

It's better to let the protagonist take Qin Yumo away. At least the protagonist won't lie to Qin Yumo.

I read the book review and it turns out this is extremely poisonous and will kill you.

Every time-traveling protagonist here looks like *. Like waste within waste.

这本书设定上有一些问题，怜风不可能知道天使的信息，除非是彦告诉她的，她不过是德诺文明的工程师罢了，跟天使文明差距太大，不谈天使消除信息的手段，就这两个文明而言天使完爆德诺星系，她怎么可能知道主角的事情。而且还说形体战争，按照雄兵连的剧情怜风对于三角体一无所知，甚至还想去跟它们谈判，你写的他们居然参加过形体战争？这根本是不可能的。德诺星系说白了就是个伪造神时代，闭关锁国，根本就不知道外边的世界是什么样的！不要吹太过了，曾经的德星之力如果真的把神河之力的基因开发出来的话，这个宇宙早就是德诺文明的了，

If you want to write a new book, let's continue writing the mid laner in the next one. It's better to have a beginning and an end.

If no one rewards me, the author won't update?