Anime Crossover: The Round Table of Knights in the OL Era

The plot feels good. But. The character is wrong. Yuki Asuna doesn't just know how to run. It can be seen in Sword Art Online that she doesn't just run when the Death Game appears. Instead of wielding a weapon to kill the enemy? And how come some believe the plot and some don't believe it at all. Not as good as others. As long as you don't take action. How can a kind-hearted girl like Yukino Yuki and Asuna act like a passerby who backstabs her teammates? The protagonist complains that when he sees a girl in crisis, he doesn't save her easily. Still waiting to see if the other party will stab him in the back like before. All I can say is that the protagonist is not remotely similar except for his strength and Arthur's old sword. This is not a lick. I mentioned before that the protagonist obviously played a copy of the game with other players and watched the backstab. Now that I see the true, kind and beautiful heroine, I doubt that her character and character should attract zombies.

Does anyone know why Fei Lu's novel turned green?

If you don't draw them and leave them to eat dust, it's better to draw them first so you can plan how to use them. Otherwise, you just happen to draw something useful temporarily? This is a common problem with lottery cheats. If you don't know what to draw, just make a guarantee mechanism and then everything else is **. It's not easy to write down all the useful things in ten companies.

There is a misunderstanding that still needs to be corrected. The Holy Sword of the Stars is not a single one. It has the same specifications like Gawain's, and it does not have the ability to explode stars. The original saying is that hitting the white giant does not kill it. Goetia has accumulated ** years of light wheels, but it can't explode stars, and can only wash the surface. Not to mention this, the Holy Sword of Numbao has been patched, and now it has the same specifications.

It's okay, but the introduction is not clear. The protagonist has two systems. One has been introduced, but I don't know if it has been fully introduced. The other system has not been introduced, and I don't know what system it is. It is recommended to give the protagonist a status bar with abilities, skills, equipment, etc. Don't write attributes (strength, etc.), It is easy to collapse.

There is another question. I feel that the author probably doesn't have an outline. He wrote about the advent of the OL era before jumping to the point of consciousness, allowing the protagonist to travel to a different world and directly become the strongest in the world. Then the question comes, what is the meaning of the world in this OL era, and what is the meaning of writing characters in comprehensive comics? Shouldn't this jump to infinite streaming?

I have watched Fifteen so far, and I feel that the stakes for the protagonist are a bit too high. The strength has increased too quickly, and I have to fight the planet consciousness all at once. I am very curious about what the future development will be. If this continues, I feel that the only way to develop in the future is to go to Hakoniwa.

Commentary on Chapter 4: The Silver Knight Is Not Prince Charming in "Comprehensive Comics: Knights of the Round Table in the OL Era" written by Arthur, the Cowherd of the Round Table.

Commentary on Chapter 5 of "Complex: Knights of the Round Table in the OL Era" written by Arthur, the Cowherd of the Round Table. It is normal for a knight to fire off light cannons.

Commentary on Chapter 6: Countdown to the Destruction of the World in "Comprehensive Comics: Knights of the Round Table in the OL Era" written by Arthur, the Cowherd of the Round Table.