
DanMachi: The Sword God of Hephaestus Familia
地错:赫菲斯托丝眷族的刀神
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 457k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
214Chapters
5MReads
235.4kFlowers
9.9Score
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Reader comments 50
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You know how much the original Bell was promoted in half a year, so why would you think that the male protagonist with a golden finger would be inferior to Bell? Not to mention that there is no such damage as the Reiatsu Zanpakutō, how about your ability to clear dungeons every day for half a year? Then why don't you say that half a year has passed and a month has passed? Let's just say that most of them build Zanpakutō, right? If you are afraid of improving too quickly or being unsafe, you won't hide it? Blue Ribbon is fine. Hephaestus still has something going on, right? What you see is level two, but the actual level is five or six, right? There are so many ways to choose the worst one. By the way, does the author grind dungeons every day? Can't remember clearly
I'm really speechless. The protagonist calls himself a sword god? Is the protagonist worthy? Even if he becomes a sword god, how long can he live? Human beings are human beings. Even if they become the race of reapers after death, how long can they live? He should not be a human being, but add the ultimate life from JOJO to his favor, right? Become a life form with genes from all races. There are dwarves, elves, dragons, gods and other powerful races on earth. So becoming the protagonist of Ultimate Life will be the most powerful life form with a short lifespan? Doesn't exist.
Why does this strength feel so weak to me? I will understand why, but I still look like a rookie. The God of Earth is very strong. At present, only Ichito and Arihad have reached the level of God. At the stronger surface level, Aizen can only touch the threshold. But the mid-level and high-level combat power is much stronger than that of the Shinigami. The average captain level is basically lv7 or above, not to mention the following ones. What is the spiritual pressure level of the protagonist now?
How should I put it, the subject matter is good but the protagonist is like a boy who gives away treasures for free. The weapons used by people at level 5 have several small targets, but a Zanpakutō only costs 50 million? This is not how you play for free. Moreover, the Zanpakutō can be called by its true name as soon as it is obtained. It doesn't matter if the protagonist cheats. It's boring if the supporting characters can play like this. The ability that others have worked hard to awaken is really given to you for nothing.
. . It's another typical case of suppressing the battle and dragging the main line. It looks very sluggish, but it actually grows slowly. While writing about the protagonist's talent level, I have been married to LV2 for two months. I can't say anything. Sometimes, if the story is not very enjoyable, don't make the main character's setting look so enjoyable, as it will leave people speechless.
Isn't the destructive power of a Zanpakuto determined by spiritual pressure? So what is the problem you are talking about? The male protagonist's spiritual pressure is not that high. The male protagonist is still at level two after six months? Just because? When is Bell six months old? Are you still not as good as the original male protagonist? What do you think? Do you want to wait for the plot or something? If it's to attract girls, wouldn't it be better to arrange for someone else to do it and then take it slow? Do you only write about this world? According to the strength of the male protagonist's Zanpakutō, it's more than level two in six months. It's hard to find a novel about Hephaestus, but you let me explain it so thoroughly.
Bell's attributes were upgraded to level S in one month, and the protagonist's advantage attributes were only A in two months. In the case of glitches, the protagonist of the time-travel novel is not as good as the original protagonist. In our opinion, he is a waste.
I would say that the protagonist should build himself an enhanced version of the Enra Kagōden, which can copy all Zanpakutō, and decentralize all other Zanpakutō like Gray Man and Senbonzakura. If the protagonist makes several Zanpakutō for himself and fights them for others, it won't be long before the author has to come up with new Zanpakutō settings. There are only Zanpakutō with names in the original work, and you have to think of them yourself after using them.
It's a pity. The subject matter was well chosen, but the writing was a bit broken.
I am used to seeing genius-style protagonists, but suddenly I feel a little uncomfortable seeing such a slow-growing protagonist. After working hard for several days, the growth of each attribute is still very limited. Not to mention the Uehara protagonist, it feels slower than some lv4s. . .