Naruto: Akatsuki, Be My Underlings

The protagonist is so useless. Hanzo, who didn't even have the ability to hit the Super Shadow with the Thunder Fruit, was able to drain so many chapters. Breath of Thunder and others cut off the head of a person with a knife without mentioning it. It can only be used for scraping. I can only say that it's really a lot of water.

The timeline is messed up and the writing is messy

Why did King Da Mao become a knife user? He could also hit people with the back of the knife. He often described how he could use the knife to kill one person.

The timelines don't match up. Madara was already dead when Danzo and Hanzo attacked Akatsuki, and Obito also put on a mask.

The protagonist has just joined the organization. The protagonist doesn't show anything, so he wants others to believe him. If he doesn't believe it, he is cowardly. If he wants to attack the other party, others will take pictures of you. What's the use of the Akatsuki organization? Don't you want other people's intelligence network? The intelligence level of the protagonist is directly proportional to the author. For such a mentally retarded thing, Artoria doesn't have the slightest feeling of the original work. You are really not suitable to write a novel.

To be honest, instead of being unified, it would be more satisfying to have one super person with multiple powers. The previous Hokages were basically unified, and the previous Hokages were basically not shadows.

The ability of the natural system is a sure blow to Naruto. With the ability of the Thunder Fruit, a thunder and lightning teleportation, a large discharge, in the Land of Rain, a place full of water, an electric shock can kill any ninja. . . .

The protagonist is so useless!!! There are many water characters! What the hell?

At the beginning, Artoria appears with the back of a sword. Are you Japanese? The sword is indistinguishable, does the sword have a back? It's so funny that Yahiko has become a Kage level. At this time, it is not certain whether the Sannin is a Kage level. If Hanzo is one against three, what can Hanzo do? He will put a poison. If he puts too much poison, he will become a demigod? For the first time, Hanzo couldn't resist the Tailed Beast Tama, that is, under several jinchūriki, Ohnoki was the first person under the Chokage, and Hanzo seemed to be completely incomparable to Ohnoki. Tobirama, Raikage, who can he compare to? Hanzo is considered a more powerful Kage at best, and the three of the three ninjas were given names against one. It can be seen that the three ninjas at this time are either novices at the Kage level or have not yet reached the Kage. Jiraiya has only been teaching for a few years, and you, Yahiko, flew directly to the Kage.

Xiaonan, are you not going to take it? If you want, you made her so annoying and used a woman with a reader as a buffoon. How did you do this?