Devil High School: I Was Reborn and Became a Devil

Translate the author's pinned message: 1. That's not a poisonous point, it's because you readers are too pretentious. 2. I explained what I wanted to do later, but I won't change or delete it before.

Um, I didn't dare to read the comment section at the first glance. You wrote a fanfic about this world without removing the original male protagonist? Everything else is normal. You know exactly what this is and you still want to write out the original male protagonist. Don't you think there is a little need to patch it up? Moreover, most readers will never buy it if it is written. People will have preconceived notions. Most of them care about the appearance of the original male protagonist, rather than the so-called original male protagonist who has modified the plot and can write whatever he wants. I have read this fanfic and almost no author dares to let the original protagonist live or take away the golden finger of the original male protagonist and become a passerby without a plot. You not only have a plot but also work under the male protagonist. I can't comment.

Ichiro tried his best to destroy Turkey's marriage and freed Rias. Then you told me that Rias and Himejima Akeno are not interested in Ichijo but are interested in the protagonist? Why are they the protagonists interesting? Just because the protagonist added some magic to them? Isn't it better than trying everything in one city? I really don't know how you wrote such a crazy paragraph. The protagonist didn't even help Rias, but just added some magic to make Rias interested in the protagonist? Or are they unable to see that the protagonist is only interested in magic? Anyway, I don't know how to criticize you. Author, who do you really think we are? How can I write without thinking as much as I want?

Although I don't know what you think, I know that your book will never survive in Feilu, and it may be difficult to make money. Needless to say, even though I haven't written much yet, Hyoudou Kazunari has already joined and can seduce most people.

Why can't we just make Brother Cheng disappear as a god, or just let him be an ordinary person? It's not a good thing to always involve the original male protagonist in the plot, let alone a meaty male protagonist.

When you write this book, please get back to me and see if you can change the bad points of this book. After all, there are not many comic books that can be read nowadays. The main purpose of writing a comprehensive comic is to prevent the original protagonist from appearing, and to avoid male characters appearing next to the heroine, and then the protagonist will not be able to nourish his stomach. As a result, you not only wrote about the original protagonist, but also gave it a lot of space, and didn't even care about the original protagonist's character. . . It's quite hard to describe.

Let's complain about the flaws in the first chapter. After patching, Rias didn't notice the protagonist, but at the same time, it didn't happen to sleep. In the latest chapter, the main character was training her men and her nose was bruised and her face was swollen, and she felt distressed. Firebirds were about to come to force her into marriage.

Mark, the book review is so interesting. It's okay if Shen Yin didn't write about Issei when he was obviously killed. Why do we have to write about him for such a simple thing? Do you like the original protagonist so much?

About "Yitian: The Strongest Young Master of the Beggar Clan" written by Ru Xiaoqi 006 Dragon Subduing Palm Technique + Dog Beating Stick Technique! The road to invincibility! Chapter review.