The Outcast: Starting by Capturing a Bewitching Zombie

The heroine was fucked until she was about to die, and the protagonist was ambushed and set up. What the hell is this female channel's routine of torturing the heroine!

Isn't the protagonist a time traveler? The writing is a bit frustrating. This chapter describes that the protagonist's strength is also the pinnacle of aliens. He is at the level of ten people. He was threatened by a few unknown people with no gender and didn't show any sign. Forbearance is not so hidden. At this time, Xia He has fallen in love with Zhang Lingyu. It will be difficult to arrange what you wrote. You didn't make it clear about killing your master and using children to practice martial arts. You wrote that you kill people like crazy but care about your relatives and friends. People like this kind of demonic villains, but the kid who kills his master and his friend while practicing kung fu and not explaining the reason behind it really challenges the moral bottom line. Also, the few I just wrote are either blocked or cannot be posted, and they are incoherent. It seems that your introduction is a cool article. You can't start it again. With the addition of a beautiful zombie and one person, the creativity is quite good and the writing is also good. But your plot arrangement is poisonous and most of the whole book is ruined.

The male protagonist can't take revenge on Zhang Lingyu! Not responsible yet

Let's cut it. Readers like to take it for granted. Who would like a story about why he raped his master and destroyed his ancestors? Of course I haven't read the content yet, just my first impression after reading the introduction.

You really know how to play when you take a video of your own woman and send it to others,

Without even a moment of mourning for Liu Pan'er's death, it was Xia He, the bone scraper, who rushed to the battlefield immediately.

It's uncomfortable if you don't know the plot at all. Moreover, without a cheat, how can a pure native birth be compared with a cheater?

Aboriginal haha! Not a cool article at all! **

The author suggested building Junyang. I think you are very talented in writing short essays. You can set the threshold and charge a fee. You can post things that Feilu cannot post there. I think it will definitely be popular.

Is it a big taboo to write a cool article about abusing women? Read your introduction yourself, this book is ruined.