
Anomaly Character Highlights: Xu Si Tears Off His Own Leg from the Start!
盘点异人名场面:开局徐四卸腿!
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- Fanfiction
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- Anime Fanfiction
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- 1y ago
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All-time: Reads, Flowers.
806Chapters
13.9MReads
104.9kFlowers
10.0Score
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Brother's stove is broken, brother's heart is also broken dog
This author likes to play tricks. This time, most people must have thought that Feng would win the award. In the end, the award was given to the Wang family, which can be said to have the highest hatred value among fans. My estimate is correct. Before, most people thought that the MVP should be given to Alian, but it was given to Sister Baoer. However, everyone was the first to react to Sister Baoer's wave. It should probably be acceptable, but I have to remind the author that this kind of contrast can only be played occasionally, otherwise it will wear down the readers' mentality, especially in the case of Fatty Wang. If you don't immediately reverse it and drive Fatty Wang into the ground, and let the readers have to endure the arrogance of Fatty Wang for a while, then the reader's experience will be extremely bad!
Author, you are slightly mistaken. Not only is Zhang Chulan not ugly and unpopular, it is mainly because he is pretending to be so. Didn't you realize that in reality, his college roommates say he is a weirdo? He also wears a 200-dollar outfit, and sometimes his temperament is a bit wretched! In the original out-of-body memory, it is shown that a beautiful female classmate liked him, and Zhang Chulan's prototype is the young man Liu Jianming from Infernal Affairs II. When he is serious, he looks like a handsome ruffian~
To be honest, the author, I think you did one thing very well. I have read several books of Yi Ren, and you have at least achieved that the characters basically have no OOC, and the off-site interactive characters' inner narration is not obtrusive. Linglong here thinks that Lingyu is a bit silly, which really corresponds to the original Tangmen chapter ~ Hahaha ~ To be honest, if you hadn't randomly added drama to Lingyu in the early stage ~ several people in front of you wouldn't have complained about you ~
Everyone wants to learn from Zhang Chulan, but they don't. They don't have the talent or the brains. In fact, there are pros and cons in this gap of ten years. If it hadn't been for these ten years, how could he have such deep scheming? Where would he have so much tact and sophistication? Later, through memories, I realized how humble he was. In my opinion Chen Duopian said that he did not have the wisdom to strategize, but in my opinion, a seven or eight-year-old child can hide himself in front of a bunch of professionals in the company. He also said in his memory that it would not work if his grades were too bad or too good. How could he control points? It goes without saying how scary the point-controlling boss is~
Haha, Zhang Chulan is an ordinary talent, you can make another joke here ~ Just enough to have a wave of memories of Bilian's childhood. The prerequisite for cultivating the thunder method is that the intensity of the golden light spell reaches the standard ~ Zhang Chulan can practice to this level at the age of 7, it is really terrible ~ After the death of his grandfather when he was 7 years old, some people said that he was 19 years old. He practiced secretly, but later recalled that he noticed that someone was watching him and even stopped doing static kung fu~ In other words, after 12 years of not practicing, he might not be as good as he was when he first met Zhang Lingyu, and then within a month, he improved the golden light to another level. !!
But there is one thing you wrote wrong. According to Feng Zhenghao's evaluation of Zhang Chulan and Luo Tian in the original work, he already had a certain degree of investigation and understanding when he invited Zhang Chulan. So it is definitely not as simple as training a thug. If you train a thug, can you send your daughter away directly? Why Feng Zhenghao is so sure that Feng Shayan will be a good choice if she can marry Zhang Chulan is because he has taken a fancy to Bilian's character! I think he is a person who can achieve great things~ To be honest, Feng Zhenghao, who is like Brother Wubai in the original work, looks down on him, and would really only regard him as a thug, because Feng Shayan is not smart in the first place, and this Brother Wubai is even more stupid~
Let me go. I found that you have almost written seventy chapters. When taking stock of Bilian, why is Zhang Lingyu's presence stronger than Bilian? This is Bilian's place! And to be honest, your junior uncle is too OOC. In the original novel, the junior junior uncle has been following Bi Lian for so long but he is still a little angel. How can he change within a few days after meeting Bi Lian here?
To be honest, Zhang Chulan has only been practicing for two or three years. Zhang Huaiyi should have taught Zhang Chulan how to practice when he was five or six years old. However, Zhang Chulan became disabled when he was seven years old, and he has never practiced for more than ten years since then. However, otherwise the company would have discovered it long ago, which means that Zhang Chulan's maximum training time should be one to three years, which is shorter than Wang Ye's time. Wang Ye practiced Qi for three years and then met Fenghou Qimen in a few months. Zhang Chulan was old How long does it take to practice agricultural skills? Not to mention giving Zhang Chulan Qi Tiyuanliu or letting him practice for ten years. If you let Zhang Chulan practice for two more years, he can beat Zhang Lingyu. Zhang Chulan's talent and Wang Ye's talent are really strong. Others are How long have they been practicing? Zhang Chulan and Wang Ye are like the two sides of the old Heavenly Master when he was young. If all the younger generation so far spend the same time practicing, only Zhang Chulan and Wang can earn first, and not even Village Chief Ma.
What you wrote about Chen Duo is real water, and the sand swallow and Zhijin flower are really annoying.