Xuanhuan: Forced to Marry Into a Family, I Build a Clan That Will Live Forever
玄幻：被迫入赘，打造长生家族
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 383k Words
- Genre
- Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Otherworld Continent
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
169Chapters
2.2MReads
22.4kFlowers
9.7Score
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Already forty chapters. The protagonist only has the skill of refining medicine. And there is no cultivation level in the body. He hasn't even made a breakthrough in Qi training. This is the most useless system-flow protagonist I've ever seen in Feilu.
Isn't it too fake, giving a gift package to a useless alchemist who is always under surveillance and short of money? Isn't this courting death?
No matter how you describe any prince, the word "trash" cannot appear in it.
This genre is actually very easy to write, and you can read it without too many poisonous points. However, your book has the two most poisonous points besides cuckoldry. It restricts a lot of pressure and low-energy protagonists.
No, you can have a long-term relationship, and don't use any poison. It feels like goods. The system can have thoughts, but it can't make decisions for the protagonist, you know? Otherwise, it feels like the protagonist has become a puppet of the system, especially when the system says that this world is dangerous? You can let the protagonist meet by himself, but you can't say it systematically, otherwise it will feel like the system is a bit useless, even the whole world is afraid of it, and the harem shouldn't be too biased, right? Are having spiritual roots and not having spiritual roots different things? Is that called a harem? The above are my suggestions. I can't write a book, so the author can refer to it and use it if it's useful or not. Just treat it as if I didn't say it.
Looking at your introduction, I would like to send two words to the author, s... B
When I first watched it, the beginning was a bit silly, but I haven't watched the rest yet. If nothing else, this kind of shame will be worthless if it doesn't come back with revenge later on. Don't try to capture the women of the Zhan family to give birth to babies later. If there are many women like this, they will still accept them. Haha, forget it.
Don't complain and regret the choices you make, otherwise I'll really feel bad for you, and the protagonist like you is so stupid and brainless.
The protagonist was ruined by your writing, and I guess your book is also ruined.
Another character who sells charms to make a living. Hehe