
From the Start, I Leave the Straw Hats and Join the Beasts Pirates
开局退出草帽,我转身加入百兽团
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2mo ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
451Chapters
7.5MReads
302.2kFlowers
9.9Score
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What the hell are you writing! The character of the protagonist is really very bad. More than ten years of education and the Chinese environment have brought up such a protagonist! I'm disgusted by this kind of time travel to the past where the character becomes more of a villain than a villain. Also, does the protagonist have any tragic experiences? No. Your dad needs to go to the deep sea to catch the sea kings. There is a fart threat on the island! Or is it that those who travel through time now are all insane! The protagonist is obviously a murderer, but he says he wants to protect the crew.
Luffy won't have a conflict just because the male protagonist likes to hit last. Everyone on Luffy's spaceship has some bad habits.
The protagonist actually likes that white-eyed wolf Yamato. The most annoying people in One Piece are Momonosuke and Yamato. They keep saying that they are that fool Kozuki Oden, which is really annoying.
With the character of the Hatters, even if the protagonist leaves the pirate group, even if their personalities are inconsistent, when they think the protagonist is in danger, they will still risk their lives to save the protagonist. However, the protagonist is very powerful, so this scene will not happen. It is estimated that there will only be a cliché plot in the future where the Hatters condemn the protagonist. Seeing such a plot, my blood pressure will rise. I hope the author will carefully polish the character and related plots, although most of Fei Lu Shuang's novels do not need to be read with a brain. But when I see something unreasonable, I still can't help but frown, but things must be reversed, and the author can be cruel. The navy ambush the protagonist, and the hat group mistakenly thinks that the protagonist is in trouble and tries to save him. When they see the protagonist showing off his power, the hat group invites the protagonist to join the group again, but the protagonist refuses indifferently, and then escapes. Although they are speechless, there are a few people who think it should not be like this. In the end, the two waves broke up, and then the hat group was ambushed by pirates or navy who had shown mercy.
Are all Luffy's crew good people?
Have you ever experienced the main character of One Piece? Some of them may not be killed, but if one of the team members kills the enemy, the others will never have any objections. Luffy didn't do anything wrong with the Holy Mother either. He didn't fight everyone who needed to be hit, and some of his frustrations were due to his lack of strength. There is no plot that goes wrong due to character issues.
Luffy himself cannot be the Holy Mother. In Alabasta, Luffy said that there are no undead people in war. Now you are saying that Luffy is the Holy Mother.
This is a hook that spoils old readers. There have been five or six books in a row that say eunuchs are just eunuchs. I will never read another new book by this guy. I will send him to the factory to drive screws!
By the way, would Luffy and the others really scold their companions for killing people? Although the original comics did not show much of it, in fact, as a pirate, there were not a few pirates and marines who died at the hands of Luffy and others along the way. In the top war alone, pirates and marines together must have died at least tens of thousands of people. How many of them were affected by Luffy's battle? Did Luffy ever care about the life and death of those people? No, during the entire battle, the only thing he cared about was the life or death of Ace, his adopted brother. Moreover, according to the setting of One Piece, in fact, Luffy and others only really care about their companions. As for others, even Luffy and others who are relatively kind-hearted will not care too much about the deaths of some pirates that have nothing to do with them. To be more precise, there are no people with particularly high moral bottom lines among the pirates in One Piece. It is impossible for either party to deliberately hold back or let go. From the beginning of the book, the protagonist is still a member of the pirate group who joined the pirate group in the early days. The objects he killed were only the enemies who opposed the *hat pirate group along the way, instead of killing some like a madman. As an unarmed civilian, Luffy, who cherishes his companions, cannot be so holy as to reprimand his members for killing too many enemies. From the lowest level of logic, it is very illogical for the protagonist to be harshly criticized by his companions for quitting the Hat Pirates. Of course, novels, especially fan fiction, are mostly the product of self-pleasure, and the author just wants to be happy writing it.
Do you think Luffy would blame his companions for last-hitting enemies?