In Super God, I Usher in an Era of Cultivation!

The author didn't even understand how powerful the Great Sage is. He can explode stars at will and explode the star field with all his strength. With Kesha's strength, he can stand up to the sky and be a saint. With the strength of the protagonist, the Great Sage, there is absolutely no problem in overturning the super god universe.

No, they all have the strength of the Great Sage, wouldn't it be enough to just wipe them all out? Is Laoshizi Academy strong? Can it destroy the star field?

Self-cultivation? If you want to write like this, tell me in advance, don't waste time.

Just the first three chapters, I have a lot of flaws. 1. You don't preach until the war is about to begin. Is it possible to practice cultivation so quickly? Just improvising 2. Walk the Long March again and understand the cultivation method. What is the relationship between the Long March and cultivation? I'm thinking that while you're walking around, Hangu Pass is more reasonable than this. 3. The candidates chosen for training are the most powerful soldiers in the military region. What does being the most powerful in the military region have to do with cultivation? Cultivation requires talent, understanding, and perseverance. The group of people in the military region had at most qualified perseverance, talent, and understanding yet, so they randomly selected a group of military kings. 4. The protagonist's speech is semi-contemporary and extremely awkward. I can only say that the setting is interesting, but the writing is simply unreadable and awkward no matter how you read it. Even if you lose your mind and watch it, you will feel uncomfortable.

It's purely an operation of opening high and moving low. Look at your third picture. The protagonist has the strength of the Great Sage, so wouldn't it be okay to directly push the Super God Universe? , Isn't it easy to preach again after being pushed aside? I can't watch the rest of the plot. It has to be developed step by step, but I won't directly push it forward. I can only say 666,

The protagonist is just talking nonsense. When he has a lot of room for growth and has not yet grown up, he goes to the angel civilization to mock and mock, which is pure cerebral palsy. I don't know why the author would let the protagonist be mocked by an invincible force in a universe. Ge Xiaolun is the power of the galaxy, and all the advanced civilizations in the universe know it, but who is the protagonist? In their eyes, he is not even a shit, and he still puts on such mockery. Writing a novel is completely mindless.

This pig's foot is just crazy*

Dukao was a high official in the Tang Dynasty, probably the prime minister, and the Denuo people had been developing for ** years. It's hard to say who belongs to China. If there are 10,000 people in a family and the inheritance lasts for 1,000 years, how many descendants can you tell us? Not to mention there are a bunch of old immortals.

How dare you judge whether a civilization's technology is crooked or not?

It's not about whether the author's protagonist is a cultivator or a god created by technology. In the new chapter, the protagonist upgrades the fourth-generation divine body. Do you have any misunderstandings about the strength of the Great Sage? Which great sage's physique is not stronger than the fourth-generation divine body, and he also upgraded the fourth-generation divine body. I am completely confused after this.