
Writing a Seduction Guide in Konoha, and Hinata's Gone Wrong
人在木叶写泡妞攻略,雏田坏掉了
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- Fanfiction
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- Anime Fanfiction
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- 2y ago
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All-time: Reads, Flowers.
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Of course, he secretly killed the Kumo ninja envoy with fire escape and threw it into the Sarutobi clan's land! Let the Sarutobi clan hand over the life of the deputy clan leader! All for Konoha!
There are a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand people. The strategy angle I imagined cannot perfectly match what everyone Yanzu wants. You Yanzu can discuss here what you think is a more reasonable strategy angle. For example, conquer Hinata. Those who have read the original work should know that she was not confident enough, so she longed for Prince Ming, and fell in love with him over time. From the strategy perspective, we can target this point. Another example is Terumi Mei. Yan Daoge, an older leftover girl who hates marrying into a party but still has high demands. The strategy angle can be developed based on these three aspects. Of course, the strategy perspective is not necessarily limited to this. If you guys have any more novel strategies, please feel free to share your thoughts. One thing to say. All of you Yanzu who replied must be real winners in life.
Hinata Hizashi actually believes in the analysis of a 3-year-old child. No matter how perverted a person is, it is impossible for a 3-year-old to be able to analyze what Kumo-nin wants to do and the current situation of Konoha Village. Hinata Hizashi actually believes it. If you say that the male protagonist is an adult and can analyze the current situation of Konoha Village and the conspiracy of Kumo-nin, it would still make sense. My CPU has been destroyed.
Author, think about it for yourself, would you let your daughter take a bath with a boy from another family? Not to mention 3 years old, 5 years old can already remember things. Even if I am 1 year old or half a year old, I will not do such a thing, not to mention that this is the first time we have met, and there is no relationship at all.
Doppelganger to pick up girls? You are a talented author**
The writing was quite good before it was released, but Izumi Uchiha was too hooked. The reincarnation eye was opened directly, and the protagonist also had the reincarnation eye. In this case, he was already invincible. Well, he was actually imprisoned and investigated by Muye. I was speechless. It can be said that this plot collapsed directly. In fact, a kaleidoscope is enough for Uchiha Izumi's explosion. It's not too late to give top rewards like the Samsara Eye in the later stages. After giving it in the early stage, the protagonist's way of doing things and his strength completely did not match, and there was a strong sense of separation.
I feel that when the protagonist talks about the issue of interests, especially between Shinobu Villages, many of his ideas feel a bit inconsistent with his own interests. If you are strong, you really need to balance it, but if one is super weak and many are weak, then it is called annexation at best, or annexation at worst. Unification according to your strength is the general trend. You are still improving other people's resources, which is unreasonable. Make it more difficult for yourself to unify. If you are not unified, then there is no difference between you and Madara Hashirama. You will slowly become the same again without you. It's better not to write these things, just write about the plots with girls that you are good at. Don't talk about the distribution of interests in this international situation. This feels a bit weak as soon as you write it.
Maybe it's because I've read too many Naruto novels, but the actual performance of this book feels quite stretched.
This clone, well, if you write it down, please finish it off. It's fine if you say that you didn't do anything. The clone took the girl out. With the relationship between the male protagonist and the girls, holding hands and hugging each other are possible. After all, the girl doesn't know that it is the shadow clone. As for whether it will be a kiss, I don't want to talk about it. This kind of hidden green is poisonous, which is always a thorn. It doesn't matter if you write well later. If there are other poisonous spots, this spot will definitely be pulled out and whipped to death. It's a bit much to say, so I'll leave it at that for the time being. It's fate.
Two pairs of samsara eyes, and they both have immortal bodies. Are they so seductive?