Anime Crossover World: Creating a Chat Group From the Start

The writing is too messy, there are more trumpets than real people, the protagonist's plan is not clearly explained, and the people who appear on the scene can't figure out whether it is a real person or the protagonist.

The protagonist thought about it for a long time and came up with this. He hid himself directly and acted in full vest. If the heroine doesn't accept her, is it because he fell in love at first sight and got it for nothing? With the ability of the protagonist, he has an invincible start, not to mention going straight into darkness and madness. This emotional point is not what Hua Lala comes from, and then saves the world with light.

It's too confusing, I can't figure out the real person, there is a trumpet, there is such a cheat, and there is such a petty attitude.

You don't even mark the characters you play, so who knows what you wrote? I have seen a few books of this kind where people are lured and then use a trumpet to deceive them, but at least they have a note that the trumpet is the protagonist. If you look at it like this, you will understand. If you are playing Werewolf, it is all based on guessing.

It's so messy, I was so confused when I watched it, I was so convinced

It's so messy, my head hurts when I see it, I'm going to have a brain.

The protagonist is very indifferent,,, when you mention it from time to time, I thought you were writing about the World Fusion Personnel Competition

What does the protagonist want?

What the hell is this soul wearing? Can't you wear it? Or why not create a body? Is there any difference between directly integrating consciousness into the body of the new world and soul traveling? It might as well be that the protagonist suddenly awakens to the memory of his past life!

If the vest is opened too much, it will be too confusing. The overall look and feel is not great.