Di Cuo: I Am a Swordsman in the Labyrinth City

The beginning made me feel like the protagonist was a loser. A bit poisonous

Author, are you trying to poison me to the point of vomiting me out? In the beginning of some tavern, one of his employees was molested, and the Shabi girl couldn't come out. Then the male protagonist beat the teasing person to drive him away, and those few females came out. In the end, the troublemakers were taken away with their money, and the male protagonist was blackmailed for one million. This is a work that a damn person could write, that After being teased, Shabi even said that the male protagonist shouldn't take action. Haha, I laughed so hard. He acted bravely and was told that he shouldn't have taken action. He was blackmailed with 1 million, and then he was given a thumbs down by the Nabi woman. As a result, the male protagonist was promoted. He even thanked her and rushed to wash the dishes to pay off the debt. I laughed so hard! Finally, a Sabi woman came out of nowhere and asked the protagonist to teach me swordsmanship. You should at least pay some price. But in the end, you didn't get anything. The male protagonist even taught you swordsmanship. To be honest, those who watched this anime before didn't think this Sabi woman was interesting. Zaizhong, do you dare to write it down at the ** point?

How can I put it this way? At the beginning, I felt like the protagonist was like a loser. His head was full of colors. When he went down to the dungeon, he became like a late-stage chuunibyou. I felt that the protagonist you wrote was so embarrassed when he said that line. My back felt a little numb when I heard it. It was embarrassing.

Good news, anyone can write a novel. Bad news, anyone can write a novel.

兄弟们。我现在好慌，我发现我穿越了。我现在在一片树林里。这里一棵树有五六十层楼那么高。我现在慌得一匹。请问兄弟们，我现在应该怎么办？

When I heard Chapter 9, I really couldn't stand it anymore. I was so embarrassed to death. I'm such a loser. I don't have much ability but I still like to show off. I'm also very slutty.

The first five chapters are all awesome. The protagonist really fits all the characteristics of a common man in the female circle. He is a loser and has not learned how to protect himself. He still wants to fall in love with an elf with his own superiority. It's not that we can't have a relationship. Otherwise, why would I read harem novels? But you must at least recognize the reality. Mainly. The character has no self-preservation ability at the beginning. He has a golden finger but has not started. According to the evaluation of the family members, all the indicators of the protagonist are basically mediocre. In this case, he does not solve his own survival problems and subsequent development first, and goes to YY to fall in love with the elves on an empty stomach. I really can't stand such a stupid protagonist.

I finally found a novel that was written in the wrong place, but this is what happened

The protagonist is a monkey in heat. Facts have proved that people who are in heat will die if they are in heat.

Isn't the ability to develop only available after upgrading?

It's really strange. For novels in FL, good writing is not worthy of good subject matter, and good subject matter is not worthy of good writing style. The subject matter of this book is a good subject matter, but it is written... What a pity

说真的要是给全世界人发这么一封**短信，第一天就有人登，你以为这世界上那么多的电信诈骗怎么来的

It would be best to remove Yu Jianlei at the beginning. After all, he is an honest and gentle god. Rejecting the protagonist is a bit...

Suppress the strength to level 4 and fight with Bell to fight the darling of light at level 3 Who the hell are you trying to laugh at?

The protagonist can obviously fly In the end, he's still acting like an idiot How Pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger? ? Looks like I really want a pig No wonder the eunuch I saw a real cerebral thrombosis later on.

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