Rule Horror: Falling in Love with the Supernatural, Driving the Nation Wild

I feel like this system is a bit useless

Suddenly interspersing a paragraph to return to reality, and then inexplicably arrange for the ex-girlfriend and current girlfriend to come out and let the protagonist pretend to be 13 and slap him in the face. It really seems very stupid and stupid.

In fact, I hate watching this kind of barrage. This means that the protagonist cannot see the barrage. If I saw these barrage, I would just want to commit suicide, forget it. The protagonist of this kind of barrage cannot be seen, and it is purely for us readers.

The protagonist is too mentally retarded, and the system is so complicated. It doesn't feel scary or exciting at all. If you want to write a cool article, then write something that is exciting. The description of the protagonist can be done after a while, and you almost die at every turn.

By the way, your protagonist's return to the real world is the most outrageous novel of this type I have ever seen.

Can you sort out all the rules for each level and put them at the front? When I look at it like this, I want to go back and read the rules to see if it's easier.

I don't like it a bit. This book talks about human nature a bit too much. It makes me want to kill those people.

The main character is written in such a useless way that he is constantly scared. This is brain-burning weirdness. If you are not playing a haunted house, you should be scared at every turn. If you have passed several levels, you should have adapted to it. You won't be in fear from the first chapter to the end. Then you should not write it. No matter how scared you are, you should be able to calm down after such a long time. It makes my head hurt.

This so-called think tank is really awesome.

How did the author of such a brain-burning novel do it?